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PEI 09-17-05 12:56 PM

PEI vs big_o
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 10

Check in by: 09-20-05 at 12:56 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-17-05 12:58 PM

Big_O has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-05 12:58 PM.

System 09-17-05 12:59 PM

PEI has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-05 12:59 PM.

Big_O 09-17-05 01:20 PM

Hey yo PEI this will be the day that you die
crawl up in the corner of you room and just cry
Cause this will be your final good bye.....
Theres nothing you can say or do to stop me
Im unbeatable do belive me im the only homie reppin that R.O.C! So dont touch just let me BE!

Big_O 09-17-05 01:59 PM

I thought you could only have 6 lines!!! So dont down grade cause i hae minimum lines.

PEI 09-17-05 02:11 PM

its all there
Battle Rules: /\___


6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Big_O 09-17-05 02:17 PM

True but hey i cant read!! ha ha no but seriously i cant. No im jk ok ok you proved you point

PEI 09-17-05 02:51 PM

just to let you know im gonna win this battle yo
cause my rhymes are hot they'll make you burn slow
and when my punchlines leadin straight to your dome
will leave your ass twisted you aint ever comin home
and my one-lines will leave you behind bars
like the one-time lokced up now whos the star
leave your body with rigomirtis cause you cant support this
lycriyal rhymes so fast your slower than a tourtise
big o thats comical just like the tv show
and your skills are like a ghost there hard to see
thats why u need a ghostwriter to try to beat me
so u know that will never touch this flow..........

thats all i got so bring it son!!! upin vote

Dickard. 09-17-05 02:59 PM

Voted For: PEI

um, you win............................................... .........big-0 is whack nuff said

Calypso 09-18-05 01:16 AM

Voted For: PEI

Okay first off, both drops were really weak...too much self glorification, not enough punches

PEI-structure was alright...not many punches most of it self glorification need to elevate big time fam

Big O-structure was really shitty in the last bar...rhymes were basic no punches really weak drop...elevate

Vote-PEI for comin with harder punches and a better structure

B. Magik 09-18-05 01:22 AM

This was feedback posted for PEI
 
LMFAO at this battle. You both suck.

DQ 09-18-05 04:57 AM

Voted For: PEI

Big_O

Hey yo PEI this will be the day that you die
crawl up in the corner of you room and just cry
Cause this will be your final good bye.....
^uhm where is the punch? Didn't find it

Theres nothing you can say or do to stop me
Im unbeatable do belive me im the only homie reppin that R.O.C! So dont touch just let me BE!
^uhm the BE thing I guess...self-glorification at top

This ain't even a battle verse in my opinion, you had no decent punch, no personal, no wordplay, nothing but self-glorification and basic lines.

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PEI

just to let you know im gonna win this battle yo
cause my rhymes are hot they'll make you burn slow
^decent wordplay I guess, self-glorificiation

and when my punchlines leadin straight to your dome
will leave your ass twisted you aint ever comin home
^aight bar, basic but still cool

and my one-lines will leave you behind bars
like the one-time lokced up now whos the star
^aight wordplay once again

leave your body with rigomirtis cause you cant support this
lycriyal rhymes so fast your slower than a tourtise
^best bar so far, good wordplay, good punch

big o thats comical just like the tv show
and your skills are like a ghost there hard to see
thats why u need a ghostwriter to try to beat me
so u know that will never touch this flow..........
^aight wordplay, decent punches

Aight battle verse, could use some more complexity but overall decent punches and wordplay. The tortoise line was my favo one...

Vote goes to PEI for the real battle verse...RTF in my Immense battle please...

Implicit 09-18-05 05:02 AM

Voted For: PEI

Is this a wackness battle? You both suck. Really bad.

The only reason I'm going to vote for PEI is cause he admitted that was all he had. And he did have a punch in his verse. Read the 3rd line. He has the word punch in it.

wyteknyte 09-18-05 07:39 PM

This was feedback posted for PEI
 
pollz............................................. ..................

Ryda 09-18-05 08:17 PM

Voted For: PEI

umm pei u win but i kno u could do betta than that


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