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Plutonium 09-17-05 09:06 PM

Districk vs Plutonium
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-20-05 at 09:06 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-17-05 09:09 PM

Districk has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-05 09:09 PM.

System 09-17-05 09:13 PM

Plutonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-05 09:13 PM.

Districk 09-17-05 09:53 PM

you ain't dope kid....you gay..ok?.now you just quit the false hoping
cos u "iviting the nuts publicaly"..so no wonder luv da "balls hoastin"
u fall from "roping"..but yet..u ain't a vet..n ur rhymes ain't "tied" together
actin unheard..'n ur backwards..cuz u the one who "BUYS" the chedder
& despite the weather..sunny n dry..you still the one to get "wet"
wouldn't "blow up in a roll"....even if you held your "gun" to the sets
i ain't even break a sweat in this bitch like fiber glasses in winter
& u know u bit ur rhymes..but they all shit....like asses on printers
in this battle..i'm the eye squinter..'n your just the eyes closer
but at least it ends like ur dreams meant......cuz you die-a poser

Plutonium 09-19-05 03:56 AM

First battle returned...kids says my skill's a mess
Districk won't need punches...he'd use his breath
hey I still got it! I leave spasms through your skulls
your style out of age...even corpses says you old
so why did you drop...when your reign fell long ago
I throw a boomerang...
...it don't come back when you approach
great minds think alike...thats why you biting lines
you got a open mind...slipping through is my rhymes
I'd kill ya now...but you really ain't worth battling
like millions of sperms that achieved nothing travelling

Boy...I got a empty mind :( oh well.

Districk 09-19-05 03:00 PM

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Districk 10-04-05 09:56 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 10-04-05 10:17 PM

This was feedback posted for Districk
 
checking the fucking polls 'n shit...ya hear??????

Districk 10-15-05 12:42 PM

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Dickard. 10-16-05 11:43 AM

This was feedback posted for Districk
 
k-trini?



yup...................................

noname 10-16-05 12:03 PM

^it's Natural Killa to you......

you a newb...you can't call me K-trini.

Magic5 10-17-05 02:37 PM

This was feedback posted for Plutonium
 
Damn.. What the fuck happened..

You used to be way better then this..

NAH MEAN, WEIN?!

Willa 10-17-05 02:39 PM

This was feedback posted for Plutonium
 
pretty good i think u got this but im lazy lol....

Willa 11-13-05 02:08 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pp

H.D. 02-09-06 09:38 AM

Voted For: Districk

well let's see this battle had potential that just never manifested... Distrack's verse made it quite obvious that if he had a lil bit of direcetion on how to directly attack your opponant and cut out the un-needed continued refferances back to the subject character, he could be impressive... And Plutonium spent too much time explaining rust, rather than actually throwing blows... And the half disses he did throw didn't land...

Opener: Districk (not impressive but not as bad as Pluto's)
Closer: Districk
Punches: Districk (Pluto only really had 2)
Personals: Nothing to speak of
Creativity: Districk
Complexity: Districk
Structure: Districk
Enjoyment: None

Vote: Districk


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