Stop Faking it
 

chorus:

Their rhyming about shit, rhyming about techs
what they think talking bout guns is gunna get em respect
Big talkers with big mouths, who ain't got no skill
coz their just like ghosts in a way...their not real
Their talking about journeys where not their not walking it
they just need to quit the bullshit n stop talking it

Verse 1:
Their talking shit but not realising whats at stake
because under the pressure their probally gunna break
They just need to give it a rest n stop the heart ache
Your not a mass murderer, we know your not a killer
You just need to switch ya perspective up n look in the mirror
Just talk about ya struggles then release the force
coz if you can't talk about that then don't speak at all
Coz noones gunna feel you, you'll just get exposed
ti'll the point that you'll explode,you'll be creeping on ya toes
Deal with ya problems if you ain't happy with ya life
just dont go round faking it, look what happened to vanilla ice
Said he was in a gang, said he was killing guys
Instead he was exposed, just a fake who didn't rise

Chorus repeated:

Verse 2:
If your living in a hellzone with sleepless nights
Then don't talk gangsta just talk ya life
All that bullshit, it's just left for the newbies
just talk about ya own shit, it makes good music
Nobody really knows me, im kinda low stat
but my books have got more scribble than a childs notepad
My rhymes??...I talk about myself so people are gunna feel this
Now my Saliva spills quick..coz I talk about the situations that
i've had to deal with
Life can be traumatizing n life can be stressing
But just talk about ya shit, thats the art of expressing
ya inner thoughs n depth, just put it on a track
N speak about ya real life...just drop the act

Chorus repeated

ayo i give permission for somebody to make this into an audio track spitting my rhymes coz I ain't got the facillities to do it with. So If ya can I would appreciate it coz I wanna hear how my rhymes flow to a beat...feedback, peace

look homey this is not ready first off the chorus is too long, you were concentrating so much on the content you for got all about the flow but you have potentials doe keep up the good work