Rv inside out
 

Rv is stuck with people who, confront with pityfull wits,
call each other names then key up a blissfull diss,
that are full off missfull hits, i aint saying we need work,
you gotta carry the wait on your back untill your knees hurt,
too many ego's knocking about, even you were wack,
you'd pick on someone wacker, and laugh when they abuse you back,
text heads too scared to pick up a mic and express with words,
you can't be compared to audio so you just express with hurt,
none of you pull together and unite, even fight for elevation,
one person makes it with no help, that shows the dedication,
towards rap, how can you handle that, easy.. it's patience,
no teams, its everyman for himself in the rv nation,
express your feelings, write words with true meanings,
show emotion in your verses like your heart is bleeding,
don't get inluenced by the mainstream it's crazy,
i'm fucked up coz ive been following it since i was a baby,
whats the true meaning of hip hop, not how many riders your dicks got,
write to the best of you, and not how many hits you got,

link to follow..

any feed is appriciated

Wacc Shit Hommie! U Used ''Hurt Twice'' In Like 6 Barz, Da Vocab Wuz Weakk n There Wuz No Creativity In Ur Wordplay & Rhymez, Step Yo' Game Up Kidd!! 5.5/10

lol... i did this quick, was bored so ya no.. not everythings about vocab n shit, i just expressed what rv's about. suttin you dont know bout. hot off my nuts n move along plz

uppin for more feedback

LoL @ that line.

I liked it basically described "every day life" here on the site. As a growing community we obviously have issues to work out, and I guess you somewhat touched on various subjects that seemed to have matters with you.

Well done.

vocab was wack, flow was aight, nuthin really creative

that shit about text heads pickin up a mic was stupid and further demonstrates the fact that audio heads think they are cooler, ever thought that some text heads maybe just can't be bothered to pick up a mic, and only text cuz its quick and funny

plus ure audio sucks ass, ure rec is 1-3 and ure only win was cuz of a no-show

and u been following it since u were a baby, i highly doubt it, u weren't listenin to "fuck this, fuck that" when u were a kid sucka

4/10.......i own you 3x over.......fuck ure audio talk and shit about "pick up a mic son" cuz i aint gonna do it, you can perceive that as me being scared or sum shit, frankly i dont give a fuck, cuz ure sister in ure butterflies track sounds better than you. FAGGOT!

I was really feelin the concept on this one. I think the concept deserved a little bit more attention to it than you gave it. But everything was on point on it. Since it wasnt all that great with the vocab but i know you aint put that much attention into it cuz i know you are nice with ya rhymes I give it like 7/10. Just put ya all in ya rhymes i guess.

lol you know your the only person who thinks my audio sucks ass... lol butterflies track? how old that shits been said before... hip hop is audio not typing up lyrics and battling on a keyboard.. half the board is with me on this you need to chill wit ya hate n shit. i jus explained what people will do to hate on audio heads and you just did it... dick head

actually, NO.....i know several ppl on RV who think ure audio sucks ass so that puts a lid on that can of lies...........i dont give a fuck if ppl have said about ure butterflies track, it has to be said all the time cuz its true........half the board is with you on ure shit really, so you know 6,003 members do you. WOW........u are stupid, fuckin tool :thefinger

ure audio sucks ass, ure text sucks even more ass

go play with ure photoshop and make ureself a sig or sumthin

it was aight, dosen't seem like you put much effort into this man.........

eitheir u jus quick keyed it..or this is a joke

or u jus really fuckin suck....i hope diz was jus a funny

please tell me its jus a funny...

Agreed man, please just say your not serious.............This Thread Should Be Closed

naw this shit right here hit whack fucks in the back of the head caught them off guard structur was good vocab was all right nothing that stood out but basiccally on point flow could be better but keep at it for real dawg

lol was keyed.. but all i did is explain what rv's like... meh