freestyle tell me wut yall honestly think
 

I went hot summers and cold winters wit no dinner
and a freezer full of ice aint nuthin nice
I never had green so when I did get it
I had to work and run wit it have fun wit it
high speeds and seven-fourties niggaz starin hard
many battle and war stories bitches love my scars
they do care though cuz i get paid plus I'm from the Yard
town to town gettin down thats how we do it baby
undercovers we wearin rubbers cuz catchin A.I.D.S is crazy
I do the unbelievable and talk the sweetest game
and I see more dough that Snipes on the money train
me being broke is the funniest joke
its like a nigga tellin me I stole the song he wrote
I aint tryna get caught up in the madness life is good
Itz Da Tru Cashmoney follow me outta the hood

u need sum practice

Work on bein' more creative with your wordplay, it seemed too basic, Theres tutorials tho'...check them out or somthin an just keep practicin' homeboy

Keep doin' your thing.............

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need to get practice man u gotta elevateuse betta vocab