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Appocolyptik vs Spektikul
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Drop by Sunday Midnight but try to drop sooner No dickriding, so none of The Establishment are voting. No biting Blind Spit No feeding Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 09-26-05 at 04:09 AM Must drop verse in 8000 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win Appocolyptik requested reopen on 10/14 |
Appocolyptik has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-05 04:50 PM.
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Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 11:05 PM.
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Lemme take this RB whore to skool with a quick 14 liner...
Check out his flamming RB sig , who does he think he is...the 'devil?' Shit, for this battle Ima have to litterally 'drop down' to his level He said Im tryna beef, damn rights, *hits him with a piece of steak* I still 'burn herbs', your a 'Pyro-kronik'..should be a piece of cake (1) Thought that me and Soul liked him, we really thought he was a weiner (2) If you seen the tunes he rocked, you wouldnt wanna be his friend neither This kid just runs his mouth, when I ask to battle him every night Appocolyptiks never shuts up, which makes him a-pac-o-lips, right? No wonder this bitch is on my block list, all he does is stalk and annoy (2) Kid cant even serve me through text, and ironically he's a paper boy In the classifieds he needs a new job, cause his rap style is scary Battling me, I leave his verse posted at the top of the O-Bitch-uary I hope he aint staying on Rv, shit, he'd only be wasting our time For all I know... He could just be a 'pussy in a hat', and is still unable to rhyme (3) Explanations? (1) Pyrokronix is his RB.com user name
(2) Used to stalk Soul Rebel and I before we blocked him
(3) "Pussy in a hat"...Cat in the hat...childrens book with simple rhyming
...Good Enough. VOTE. |
Fuck you and The Establishment, I guess it’s critical G
That I don’t diss ya leader, coz you’d take “fuck Soul Rebel” literally When it comes to wackness you’re the epitomy, but I’ll nail this shit And I’ll put your girl up for DIY…right after I nail the bitch You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you Fucka sailor, I aint need spinach, now vision this boy Cos it’s true I’ma Popeye…till ya fuckin vision’s destroyed I love gardenin, with a spade and a shovel I’m standin coo So I plant my seed in ya girls cooch… …but the floralB where I’m plantin you I’ll smash you foo, I’ma win, no point in debating And I’ll put your concepts on t.v… …just to boost the antique channels ratings Floral B – Plant Fertilizer Don't get the wordplay don't vote |
Voted For: Spektikul
This kid just runs his mouth, when I ask to battle him every night Appocolyptiks never shuts up, which makes him a-pac-o-lips, right? vs You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Appocolyptik
Check out his flamming RB sig , who does he think he is...the 'devil?' Shit, for this battle Ima have to litterally 'drop down' to his level 5....ok..liked the concept between devil/drop-down,was a lil too long thoughB] He said Im tryna beef, damn rights, *hits him with a piece of steak* I still 'burn herbs', your a 'Pyro-kronik'..should be a piece of cake (1) [B]4....decent Thought that me and Soul liked him, we really thought he was a weiner (2) If you seen the tunes he rocked, you wouldnt wanna be his friend neither 6.....nice personal This kid just runs his mouth, when I ask to battle him every night Appocolyptiks never shuts up, which makes him a-pac-o-lips, right? 4...no,this wordplay was forced becuz ot didn't match sllyably No wonder this bitch is on my block list, all he does is stalk and annoy (2) Kid cant even serve me through text, and ironically he's a paper boy 6....nice punch wit the paper boy shit...but i didn't like how u mentioned that block list thingy again. In the classifieds he needs a new job, cause his rap style is scary Battling me, I leave his verse posted at the top of the O-Bitch-uary 5...decent wordplay. I hope he aint staying on Rv, shit, he'd only be wasting our time For all I know... He could just be a 'pussy in a hat', and is still unable to rhyme (3) 5...cat in the hat lines are a 'lil played...but this wuz ite still. Fuck you and The Establishment, I guess it’s critical G That I don’t diss ya leader, coz you’d take “fuck Soul Rebel” literally 4...forced rhyming with the "G" part that came outta no-where.Punch could have been decent if it had better wording. When it comes to wackness you’re the epitomy, but I’ll nail this shit And I’ll put your girl up for DIY…right after I nail the bitch 2...no,this was whack man. You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago 6...good nameplay. The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you 8....Lmao.I really liked this one,set-up relevant,flowed nice,punch connected..dope shit. Fucka sailor, I aint need spinach, now vision this boy Cos it’s true I’ma Popeye…till ya fuckin vision’s destroyed 5...decent enuff....didn't seem to diss much tho.. I love gardenin, with a spade and a shovel I’m standin coo So I plant my seed in ya girls cooch… …but the floralB where I’m plantin you 5...good wordplay. I’ll smash you foo, I’ma win, no point in debating And I’ll put your concepts on t.v… …just to boost the antique channels ratings 6....good OK...Close battle here. SPek... Try to stay away from links in battles.I used to do that a lot too...and it doesn't work.So try to stop with it.I thought you got too repitive by over mentioning the blocking his name thing...cuz I,personaly,am not a fan of beating around the bush.And You had some forced wordplay...with the a-pac-o-lips line. Appocolypits... After I read the 1st 2 bars...I figured you were done.But you picked it up at the end.that 1st bar was forced rhyming with the G thing that came outta no where....and the 2nd bar was just whack IMO.The rest was good shit.U kept the flow going,set-up relevant to punches...and made it hit hard.Good shit. (you might get some hate votes due to the fact ur from RB and all..so...be warned.) Vote-Appocolyptik Hit up on my battles in sig. Like it or not...that's my opinion. |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
Good Verse Spek....................................
and yo what up Pyrokronix?!?!!? |
Thanks for the vote Natural, although I didn't agree with you that my first bar was "forced," it was a detailed and good vote. And Ydat? Wtf was that? You didn't explain why he won or anything, talentless fuck.
And sup Chronic? |
This was feedback posted for Appocolyptik
*hits him with a piece of steak*
^^^^spektikul used that in his verse lolmaoroflmao plus you weren't creative at all, most of the punches were weak n just meh, but yea You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago ^^^lmao i hated ya fuckin structure but the punches and nameplay was too good to be overlooked bla bla bla.........v/Appocolyptik easily dammit you hoes, i can't even vote w/e tho should be how long you've been on the site not how many posts you have anywayz |
herbs herbs herbs...
Lets get some REAL voting crackin yall. |
Shut up Spek you fuckin fag, you're wack. You always have been, just admit it hoe. You have no talent and neither does Soul Rebel. You can't even take a loss like a man.
Lmao at you blocking me on msn just so you could use it as a punch. And now you're tryna sway the battle because I'm from RB? Fuck outa here son. |
Voted For: Spektikul
Spektikul - Good spit, it flowed well and you had some strong punches and good personals. Best Line - Check out his flamming RB sig , who does he think he is...the 'devil?' Shit, for this battle Ima have to litterally 'drop down' to his level Worst Line - NONE Appocolyptik - Good spit also, you had some ok wordplay and your punches were hitten semi-hard. Best Line - Fuck you and The Establishment, I guess it’s critical G That I don’t diss ya leader, coz you’d take “fuck Soul Rebel” literally Worst Line - The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you OVERALL - This battle was ok, I think that Spek came harder with the flow and punches though. App your didnt have as many good punches and your flow was weak. Step up on the wordplay and use a stronger flow. Vote - Spektikul RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210106 |
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