HiPnoTiK vs Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0tko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-23-05 at 07:56 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-05 08:06 PM.

u thought u could take me and cashmoney at tha same time?
bitch you couldnt even beat a pre-schooler wit them rymez
hypnosis wouldnt even help you win against me
i'd still beat you with tha quickest of quick keys*
lets git it poppin so you can expierience your loss son
this battle is like omarion(him) goin up againt big pun(me)
you set it fo a 30 minute drop cuz you want a quick loss
you aint gittin head cuz there aint no salad to toss
my rymez are demonic and jus straight insane
im catch fire quick cuz im flammable like propane

Explanations

*his kept sayin that he wanted to do a quick key against me

that last line,in other wordz i start to good real fast like how a fire startz fast wen it meets with propane

wen i said that thing bout omarion and pun,wen your readin it dont put tha wordz him and me in that,thatz jus indicating who is who

note that i was done in 4 minutez or less...wack ass shit

HiPnoTiK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 02:59 PM.

Voted For: HiPnoTiK

This cat cant play fair, he's a breaker of the rules
D/R'S notorious d, cuz he cant get fair votes hes afraid to loose
4...ok....
Askin me ta drop a quick key, too see if u can beat me
Underestimating my rhymes, you aint the onlii 1 b
3....self glorifing...no dissing watsoeva in this bar
Rhymes to far fetched your alias is batman
Voted for urself,and still lost man thats y u got banned
4....u ain't playing off it..ur just stating it.
Ya self needs elevatin, your full of played rhymes
Filled wit cheesy vocab, and lack of punch lines
5....ur best bar so far
Stop ya cheatin, and play nice you lil bitch
Smash ya backwards thassarap, thats it
4....weak...and why bring up the cheating thing again?

u thought u could take me and cashmoney at tha same time?
bitch you couldnt even beat a pre-schooler wit them rymez
3...played,basic....
hypnosis wouldnt even help you win against me
i'd still beat you with tha quickest of quick keys*
3..ok..so he said he wanted to quick jey against you?How does that relate to this punch watsoeva?It's not a play.U saying u'll beat him witout trying is wat this bar is saying.Has nothing to do with wat he said.
lets git it poppin so you can expierience your loss son
this battle is like omarion(him) goin up againt big pun(me)
2....basic concept...and omarion is not a rapper..and big pun is dead.So if your big pun...then you are dead?BAD WORDING.
you set it fo a 30 minute drop cuz you want a quick loss
you aint gittin head cuz there aint no salad to toss
2...head lines are played.
my rymez are demonic and jus straight insane
im catch fire quick cuz im flammable like propane
1...self glorifing bar here.

OK..this battle wuz pretty weak in my opinion.Both of you had your problems.But I gotta go with hypnotik.
Tha 1...
U had played concepts.Like that pre-shooler one.And that pun/omarion one..made no sence.Why you u say he's omarion and ur pun?WE know it's not true.Cuz why would omarion be here rappin when he sings and PUn is dead.If you kept the (him)/(me) thingy out of the bar..then it would have been all right.And that last bar..self glorifing.Don't do that.

Vote-Hipnotik
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209188

Voted For: HiPnoTiK

you wont that kid.. better punches ok structure thats all you

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

pollz.............................................

ooh...so mystic is Hipnotik.......maybe that's why he dropped a garbage RTF vote on my battle after i dropped a nice one,that' help him improve,on this one.

And i thought you were against aliases msytic?

Mystic's IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Hipnotik's IP: 7BE2 A0A1

Just incase you wanna deny it.

its my friend, he just dropped his verse here....

i do have an alias but its not hipnotik.....lol

yo thatz some gay ass shit right therr...u gonna git a alias and go up against sum1 youo know u can beat...thatz fucked up homie...fuckin bitch ass nigga herr...w/e tho i dont really care...and pei im removin ya vote cuz itz gay as fuck and indadiquit feedback...im jus gon have this battle closed and give him tha win...nice job homie even tho u an alias and said u were my boi...no hate...hit me bak

so becuz he's an alias...your gonna give him the win?

yo, its not my alias......lmao it was just posted here......man....

i didnt know how to post it, so i came over his house and he showd me....no alias for him