Yvonne vs Mimesis
 

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6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 09-25-05 at 10:22 AM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-05 03:26 PM.

ugh...thought it wud take me longer............................

damn girl....your verse was shit... .for real.

how cud u read it when he aint posted yet?...fuck off ...wait till its ur time

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 02:25 AM.

I am strobe...the admin...I can see anything.

and your verse wuz trash.

ok Mr strobe...we in a democratic society...so i respect ur uncalled for opinion...but its iight...if u can c where he at plz tell him to drop...thanx

You should have stayed in Front Lines, bitch.

Won battles, beaten the best here, respected, always graspin fans
....So what the fuck makes this herb think she even has a chance?

Listen,

I won that battle on lyrics.. then let you follow me here in the past
Its just sad that youve been behind me for a fuckin year and a half
Ya trash.. I remember our MSN chats.. going to need medicine, son
Cause it must be hard,
Dissin the same dude you were beggin to get lessons from
You're pulling this out?.. shit, that must be the speech of the devil
I beat you in '04 and was barely decent..
..and you STILL haven't reached that level
I read that 'Brutality Ent.' shit in your sig.. but you should listen fool
Why the fuck did you need to make your face fit the description too
Ripping dudes.. but I like to porportionalize, I'm mean with the dead
So I'll just slit your throat to even out the one in between your legs
Your sig is pretty funny though.. now I need to leave you fucked dude
And it aint that we CANT be like you.. its just that nobody wants too
You're a waste of life.. and now you really want to know what's rude?
You haven't done shit in a year..
..so me winning with less lines is the final fuck you

Fall the fuck back with your wack shit, bitch.

ok now upping this.........................................

Voted For: Mimesis

Ya trash.. I remember our MSN chats.. going to need medicine, son
Cause it must be hard,
Dissin the same dude you were beggin to get lessons from
You're pulling this out?.. shit, that must be the speech of the devil
I beat you in '04 and was barely decent..
..and you STILL haven't reached that level
I read that 'Brutality Ent.' shit in your sig.. but you should listen fool
Why the fuck did you need to make your face fit the description too
Ripping dudes.. but I like to porportionalize, I'm mean with the dead
So I'll just slit your throat to even out the one in between your legs

VS

dont worry i'll let u holla from the left side of my oval
......u can scratch ur thought like its ass-rash.....
cos with all thats said this shit is all over


Thats it seriouselyt, all your other barts lacked a proper punch,

one sided to fuck...mim takes this easily.

For more consistant punches that were all harder hitting, yv, plese fix your structur too, please rtf vs NK..not a huge explination needed.

Word.

Thanks for the vote. I'll hit up your battle when I get home from school.

You shouldn't have called me out, Yvonne.

You really think I forgot the time we were at lyrics?

Voted For: Mimesis

i'll jack this bitch off the ground with no clue
leave his mouth dry just like his ass with no crew
2...he does have a crew..u know E-style?...
this puss is occupied so stop being a mad prick
cos even if u moved bak'n'forth ur lines r still stashed script
3...weak....
you convinced to scare peeps..yeah u a lyrical scare-crow
like an unknown ID your fruitless like a bare-glow
4...first line is more like a compliment.Saying he scare people?That's a good thing to him.Punch wuz ite tho...except for the unknown ID part :huh:
we on the fooball pitch..bitch clap you black ass on the bench
when he comes all heads turn cos its like'here comes the stench'
3...Mimesis is white...and punch wuz played.I mean..ya concept is "people turn heads cuz he stinks?".Nah.
he cudnt be more life-less than run after bored asses on the lounge
this ice is more price-less than rolling 6 dices on the ground
3...nah...wuzn't feelin this as a punch.Like the rhyming tho.
i dont need mack five's to make peeps see thru this whore
my fist is enuff just like hitting frequent soft-scores
1...this is weak..again.A whack concept.Ur concept is that he is't worthy of dying from the gun..so u'll use ur fist?Weak....
this bitch be holding my clit in search for authentic fame
but its hard to slap groupies off when they appeasing the dame
2...weak....set-up wuz irelevant
he bites so much that his lips are a means to communicate
after waistin time on ur sorry ass he'd be sayin 'fanks mate'
2....No...c'mon...spit a hot bar.
i'll paint u black and blue than the back-street boys
grab ur chord like a broom so u'd give d last-bitch-noise
3...this multi wuz really forced in my opinion.
...........im done with this dick-splash..........
dont worry i'll let u holla from the left side of my oval
......u can scratch ur thought like its ass-rash.....
3...that middle part threw the flow off complety.
cos with all thats said this shit is all over
2..I'm sorry...but are u gon finish that bar??

Won battles, beaten the best here, respected, always graspin fans
....So what the fuck makes this herb think she even has a chance?
3...umm...didn't connect as a punch.Borderline self glorifing
I won that battle on lyrics.. then let you follow me here in the past
Its just sad that youve been behind me for a fuckin year and a half
4......decent
Ya trash.. I remember our MSN chats.. going to need medicine, son
Cause it must be hard,
Dissin the same dude you were beggin to get lessons from
5...good personal...Liked the rhyming words u used too.
You're pulling this out?.. shit, that must be the speech of the devil
I beat you in '04 and was barely decent..
..and you STILL haven't reached that level
7...good shit...worded nicely
I read that 'Brutality Ent.' shit in your sig.. but you should listen fool
Why the fuck did you need to make your face fit the description too
8....WOw...dope,set-up relevant..punch dope..worded good.
Ripping dudes.. but I like to porportionalize, I'm mean with the dead
So I'll just slit your throat to even out the one in between your legs
4...aah...wasn't that good.
Your sig is pretty funny though.. now I need to leave you fucked dude
And it aint that we CANT be like you.. its just that nobody wants too
3...nah..I've heard something like this before
You're a waste of life.. and now you really want to know what's rude?
You haven't done shit in a year..
..so me winning with less lines is the final fuck you
3...didn't connect.

OK..
Ynove...
ur punches were weak IMO.U just need some better concepts.Like that fist/soft-core line and heads turn/stench one....that is played shit.My advice..when writing..don't use anything that you have any doubts of being played.get more creative 'n shit.U had a forced multi with the back-street-boys/last-bitch-noice one.And the first bar..mimesis is in a crew..so fake personal.
Mim...
well...obviously not ur best.First bar wuz borderline SG.I think the "beatin 04/reached that level" and the "brutaly ent" bar got you this battle.The 2nd to last bar wuz kinda played.Some lines were a lil too direct with execution.But..an easy win

Vote-Mimesis