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2.I Can't Remember
(verse 1)
I ain't sure of who's my role model, But I know that I'm the one for my daughter I try to step higher but try not to obfuscate Hip Hop jus doesn't seems to be the music of the state And I want to touch the sky once more and when I fall down stop bein as I was before my life ricochetted from pain to love and back in the game in the name of Fame, Ax dpgg won't change, I'l lbe the same I came from a state where Rap wasn't on the main plate but somehow it jus felt to my fate thats great....... ain't it?....... it riled me a bit yo think that 99% of my niggaz thought rap was shit we black people don't get the respect that we deserve angry music?, Violent culture... I call it "talented Verbs" cuz Hip Hop is the only fuckin music with feet on da ground And I jus can't remember when It made me sound........ like: (Hook) I don't think that Hip Hop is a game.... But its the same Why do we have to rap about pain.... cuz Its a shame Escalade with golden spinnin rimz... Like if we were kings Respect and assasination themes.... are those dreams? (Verse 2) I got a hundred niggaz watchin the block, and I ain't from New York I still disrespect niggaz all the time If I don't like how they talk And i can't remember when I first started to rap I'm mnemonically tryin to froce me, I wish I get shot not now.. but maybe tomorrow, cuz we don't know when the fuck will Lord call us to perform in another show "Rich Fuck".... yeah I love my life, But I can't remember where I woke up to have the things I have now, health, friends, And I ain't broke I try to be cool, except when niggaz suffer "elbow grease" Involving themselves in stuppid beefs, Its a strong Desease Nigga please.... think about your life for a minute......... fucked up ain't it? Go head and kill ya self, but think it can change if you twist ur spirit Don't leave feed on this rap if you gon hate like we hate 50 but if you ain't like that.. you intelligent niggaz... so feed me I'll try to optimize my rap, generalize this whole poetical piece, its nice like: "take my advice" try to remember where did you picked up this slice (Hook) I don't think that Hip Hop is a game.... But its the same Why do we have to rap about pain.... cuz Its a shame Escalade with golden spinnin rimz... Like if we were kings Respect and assasination themes.... are those dreams? Link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207926 |
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Alright this was a good drop..I liked the flow and you got some spelling/grammars errors. Don't try to say "Niggas" too many times especially in one bar...that just killst he flow. I liked your approach, it was very basic could've creative. Overall Good verse here, keep writing...PEACE.
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thanx lola.......... peace
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