"End of my life" - Intermental (brings a tear to me each time)
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208881 and http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208733

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1st or 2nd track called "End of my life", its real emotional, cos this track conveys a real deep thing to me, its summin that you guys want find too emotional...but youll get the message...holla atcha boi

DAMN BOI you improved -_-bitch how come i aint improved?lol anyways great flow good lyrics good beat hu made the beat? you seemed to never fall of the beat its ace feelin it

thanks man, Ozone made the beat, I apreciate that and you are improvin

iite beat is kool... hook is pretty niice... wow you've improved alot.. this is the emotion you need on this type of track... lyrics are kool... i like this track man, hook again.. feelin this alot man imma d/load this to my mp3 you've deffo improved.. flow is a bit iffy in the hook i just noticed and its a lil bit off on some of ya verse but its no biggi its a real nice deep song props on improving man imma push it sayin u at a 7.5 keep goin man you'll get dere soon

YESS dope thanks 7.55... im gettinb there...thanks EC, holla

levels sound right

flow sounds on

lyrics are good

and delivery fits the beat, yet again

good track dawg...and the hook is good for this track


7.5/10


stay up BD

Thanks BMM lol...i apreciate that

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