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Natural killa vs Daubs
Battle Rules:
30-40 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r NO HATE 3-0 KO FINAL BATTLE Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-27-05 at 05:26 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win Reopened for 21 more days on 10/15 |
Im checkin in now man,
make sure you check in soon... ima drop by tonight, you do the same? |
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 12:02 PM.
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Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 12:45 PM.
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i'll try and drop tonight as well.
I ain't making any promices though. |
ur a bitch...no lie....so only if I could..i'd strike ur balls 'n tease
cuz daubs,i raped a girl last night,and it wuz all forced... .........just like your multis.......... the polls are tied wit u 'n teph,but ur sig says something different instead like desperate salesman,daubs,you always tryna put falseness into our head better off,u dead...cos they all rootin for me..yet u the one pullin stems cuz while trini lines are played....ur gonna make 40 lines full of them ur brain thicker than wool 'n flem..ur crew got us all barking 'n strife cos a member of LL's in the pen ......so no wonder everyone's started to type... this shit's hardly even a fight...like ur mom's ass,i'm just left untouched & ur passin to beg...cos whackness 'an egg..'n u got the nest in thrust dressed in dust...ur rhymes are old news..'n yet u'd pay to hug that 'n kiss it and i ain't talkin bout african surveys...when i say u love the blacklisting u bite styles 'n dickride vets..but i'll still leave ya jaw fructured at the end of this cos really... I ain't trying to play doctor...but ur structure's like a mimesis don't try to make any lines on pre-writing..YOU made a bitch move,stallin bouts cos take a look at bitch slapped...it took you 5 days to accept my call-out i'm winnin wit small doubt cuz ur rhymes affectin none,it don't hurt and you claim to bring sickness to rap....but infectin no one but the herbs die from the gun unheard..you UK pussies,you all stay mellow with the beef dickridin the vets so much....shit....it's almost as yellow as ya'll teeth say hello to defeat...fuckin pussy....better get ready to go through heat must have missed a loop with the stitches..the way ur flow "SEW" weak cappin this song..u rappin so long and u ain't groom anything that'd blow ur forkin ur lame raps to everyone...but you still ain't spoon any of the hoes there's no room for ur shows...ur a waste...but u lying on the laps too soon pokin this girl..cuz ur a joke to the whole world...but you still won't rap with toon(tune) capped 'n strewn...u got no balls...a woman'd have to push-ya to measure fire comes to u 'n u try to squash beef faster than butchers under pressure all comes as pleasure...shock u up..have u hawking up some tazers but u blow RAYS with ur verses ..........and I'm not talking about lasers.... I'ma stalk this hater 'n bruise hiz letters cos i seen newbs spit better 'n demure and he's been here as long as some 'a the vets...but still considered an amatuer |
my verse done posted.....so you can post yours anytime :)
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good shit....hopefully voting ain't gonna take that long.
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dope battle.......................................
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
pollz, good battle both came strong...............
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Voted For: Daubs
good battle both y'all.... DAUBS......free-range structure same as me, i hate forced structure's now :thumbup: ure flow was tight consistently, i think there was only one bar near the start that was a little choppy. u had some nice punches, a lot of original concepts in there and a couple of bars that OMFG!! they made me crack up like a fuckin madman. that one about the sewers was dope as hell. the creativity was dope as shown in the originality, although some played concepts were in there, and a couple of bars seemed a little basic to me, overall ure wordplay was dope, u used it well and mixed it up in ure punches and personals to make an affective verse, OVERALL: 8/10 NK........probably one of the best verses i've seen you put out, but thats down to the length mostly, longer verses kick ass. u had the free-range structure going on to and ure flow was consistently dope, not a single spot that went off in my opinion. ure wordplay was real good, you used it for some good punches and personals. creativity was cool in places, but the main thing that let you down is you had far too many played concepts, i think there was shit about biting style, dickriding, forcing shit, lines about fuckin his girl, sickness lines and some more. daubs had some to, but you had far too many, you did put some nice twists on a couple of them but still they were played. OVERALL: 6.5/10 V/ - DAUBS .....purely because he had a more consistently harder hitting and original, creative verse, he had some played concepts, but NK had a lot more and his punches lacked in comedy and power when compared with daubs. no hate :thumbup: |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
checkin polls...............daymn this ish is long mayn
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
Daubs fucking owned him.......
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^shoulda voted.....................................uppin for these guys
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you come into EVERY one of my battles...saying the same shit. Is that all's you do? and mystic.....we don't need help uppin,thank you. Kindly,fuk off. |
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