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My Biography (recycled)
This is one of my older drops, but it basically describes my life and was my introduction to RV on this Alias. Come to think of it, I only got two feedbacks, so leme know whatcha think now (i've obviously elevated but this is still, my personnal favorite drop, dispite all its flaws)
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Straight from the Source… A Descriptions of Sorts…
Neva’ Deformed or Forced… This Shits Intense… This is my Reality Kid… As Real as it Gets… Ima’ start from the Top and just work my way Down Life as Miscreant, Jokes, Smiles an’ Frowns My bringing up wasn’t even close ta’ Disasta’ But everyone has their own Faults an’ Mishaps just… The path they take is almost always Distorted Re-paved an’ under constant Reformin’ This is me… Deep as Fissure… Heed the title For you as a Listener are about to Embark my Recital . . If I think back Enough I can remember the Start Although it’s Hard… I’ll try ta’ Speak from my Heart See, When I was young, my Mom and Dad…They Split I felt like the String of a Yo-Yo that was meant foreva’ ta’ Spin My Mom Married a Man, and his Child she Carried Even though he Showed it he just neva’ Seemed Caring- …but, Now that i'm grown I gotta show Love… Thank you, Kenny, for Raisin’ me from a Seed to a Bud. . . To my Sister, Sharon, my best friend for life A little Older then I, you Always Thought you were Right I feel for you, Sharon, Dad stepped out on you as a Young One Fuck his Bitch Ass; He was the Dumb One… Smartest person I know, in School you got A’s Neva’ Strayed from the Subject always Remained on the Page Like a Queen you have Rose…Sprouted Thorns Thick an’ Tall… Human beings are Neva’ Perfect but you come close to it all. Straight from the Source… A Descriptions of Sorts… Neva’ Deformed or Forced… This Shits Intense… This is my Reality Kid… As Real as it Gets… Ken’s Son, my brother Jason, you need ta’ Collect ya’self Or soon you’ll be Facin’ Numerous Years of Probation… No wealth Get with it Kid, what the Fuck are you doin? Can’t you see that it’s your own Life that you’ll Ruin? But whateva’ – Live an Learn ya’self Kid… You Resemble a Childs Mentality Stuck with an Invisible Bib I hope you Realize someday an’ heed my Advice An’ next time you start thinking… Stop an Think Twice. . . To my Uncle Guido... Foreva’ Rest-in-Peace for Eternity Like my third Father when I did Bad you always wanted a Turn-at-me Sometimes I wish that things were Different…but on that Note: I wish you Stopped Sniffin that Coke, Poor Kids fatherless now, No Joke. Explosions so Potent 8 Cars, Fire an’ Gas… All we have of you now is a Ceramic Vase full of Ash… Ya’ last words foreva’ Echo in my Brain like Ripples “Neva’ Give Up” Inspiration gona make my Salary Triple. Straight from the Source… A Descriptions of Sorts… Neva’ Deformed or Forced… This Shits Intense… This is my Reality Kid… As Real as it Gets… Mom, Dad…Words can’t Explain my Gratitude… So I’ll keep it Short an Simple…Turn up the Amplitude Thank you for Life, Creation, Experience an’ Learning Thank you for Answers that as a Child I was Yearning Burning, Sometimes Discipline was Needed Whenever I chose to Hate, Make Violence you Succeeded To foreva’ my Love…Intense as it gets Foreva’ in time I’ll be ya’ Golden Blue-Print. . . Down the road of Life I faced Strife, Hardships and Chaos But built in me was a Power ta’ make all that shit Pay Off Born in Modesto, But moved up ta’ Sac town... Here’s where I Learned, that no matter what… Id neva’ Back Down Here’s a Fact now, this Is comin from within me Pencil in Hand… Thrust Open with Imagery My life is Hardly hard from Others… I truly feel for the Children without any Father’s or Mothers …You’ve just been Tainted by Mentalz... this is Real Ish... Now it’s time for me ta’ head on back ta’ my White Urban Village... Straight from the Source… A Descriptions of Sorts… Neva’ Deformed or Forced… This Shits Intense… This is my Reality Kid… As Real as it Gets… Peace. (All feedback WILL be returned ASAP) |
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Wow, This Was Pretty Intense.
...Epescially Concidering It Was One Of Your First Drops On Here. What I Loved Is How Through Out This Apeared Poetic Beauty, Yet Just Enough To Alow The Story To Jog This Line Of Truth. Just Giving A Perfect Combination In The End. The Flow, On Point As Could Be. There Was Like 2 Bars That Were Choppy In The Begining, But That Didnt Happen Again. My Favorite Lines Would Have To Be These: Like a Queen you have Rose…Sprouted Thorns Thick an’ Tall… Human beings are Neva’ Perfect but you come close to it all. I hope you Realize someday an’ heed my Advice An’ next time you start thinking… Stop an Think Twice. The Thorn Line Just For Its Poetic Purity, Just A Straight Forward Leap From O.M. To Poem Right There. The Other Line I Enjoyed Because It Just Hit Me, And Just The Way It Was Worded Was Very Impressed. Cant Even Really Explain, The Logical 'I Told You So' Just Kinda Had An Impact On Me. Real Nice Shit Fams, I'd Say Keep It Up, But You've Already Elevated Since This Shit. Stay Up Fams. |
yea this was really good for oe of ur first peices uve elveated alot one of the top heads on the site now
WHO TOLD YOU TO COME HERE :) |
Haha, sweet talk might work on Atty's zipper. All I need is an oppotunity though. Save the BS for Mystic. :p
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Uppin' for some feeds
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I give you props fo' this son. Keep droppin'.
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