Tell Me Why(My First Real Freestyle)
 

yeah i tryed,

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Tell Me Why Freestyle

imma still keep practicing

I left feed on both of status's songs

My Status and If I Had

Damn pretty good free man....i couldnt understand some of it....

first part you came in good....but didnt finish real strong......


beat is dope as shit though....u make it?

i like your lil hook you did on it, the beat is real tight i think your voice fits these kinda beats better. your free overall was good nice job wit maintaining focus on the words you were using. Your breathe control could use work, cause really thats the only reason i could till its a free. i bet you was sweatin mad rank haha, anyway nice lil freestyle man. dont quit!!:cussing:

can you rtf on ym track "can't nobody" its somewhere in the song forum.

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where u get the beat foo?

shadownville, check this out http://www.slantize.com/downloads.htm

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all them songs i left feed and no one leaving me feed:(

im feeling the beat...but ur voice was low...anyways yeah nice flow..u went smooth on this 1..u've been on this more than me so i cant tell u what to make better and what not...but on my opinion...u good..keep doing ur thang

thanks really apreciate it

iite this beat suits you real well.... the lil fing at the beggining was nice..... lyrics are decent for it when u flow its a you sayin all the syllabless like.... syll-a-bles... but overall its not a bad free man keep it up;.

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iite peepin im likin the beat, got a lil hispanic feel to it....I know you broke wit yo girl...so I know this got emotion, lyrics are good, however ure kinda tryin to push words in, but its a freestyle and im feelin the flow....keep up

not bad...not bad at all...like they said ya voice fits well with these kind of beats..u did kinda fall off at the end but thats how most frees are......nice tho........feelin it....7/10

rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210033

thanks man really appreciate it