I'm Here Now
 

New joint by yours truly... peep da siggy muh niggies, biddies and wigstaz...werdage


links

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...73&postcount=35

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...65&postcount=14

uppin this for positive/negative feedback... will RTF if links provided.. holla at me

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still looking for positive feedback... trying to see what i still need to work on... holla atcha boy for realz... will RTF if you have links to your jump offs... werdage

i dont really like the intro...i dont think you shoulda used the echo chamber it like muffled your vocals quality is aight its decent ...your voiced sounds muffled i hear like a buzzing noise.....hmmmm...lyrics was good....decent drop word

3 times in one day man? Pump the brakes on all that uppin.

intro had me sayin...huh? :wtf:
but apart from me not feeling the beat that much...but ur flow was cool...u seemed relaxed while rappin didnt seem tensed...and make sure ur air dosent get into the mic..like when u said 'pull'...

ps : did u have a cold when u did this?..cos it seems so a lil...

ahh...decent joint anyways...:thumbup:

hit my sig

wun

lol... nah... no cold... lol...just dropped the vocals and posted it... i didn't edit the track at all... didn't even adjust the vocals... just wanted to put something new on my soundclick...

and dooms... the only reason i upped it is because everyone else kept posting tracks and i wanted to get some feedback on mine before it vanished off the page... kats complain about no one leaving feed all the time and then don't wanna check for anybody else's...

it's all good... intro will be fixed today... and i need to either get me a mic shield or make one... the p's come in real hard...i noticed that too... thanks for the feed though... i'll holla after i adjust my vocals...

and yvey yve...lol...how can you NOT feel that beat?!!! that shyt is raw!!!

iite peepin.....to much echo in the intro....im def lovin this beat....quality is ok....likin the beg....lyrics def good...maybe need better breath control.....yeah the P's come in hard.....keep up likin this track....

rtf please:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210125

no doubt...be easy... will RTF on my lunch break... they be locking us off this site at work until 5 pm cuz it ain't official business...but yeah..thanx for da feed ...i'll holla