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fraud vs GKillaz05
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10-16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-29-05 at 12:47 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-05 12:20 PM.
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fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-05 12:41 PM.
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Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime...
Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme... Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest... Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed... Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass... Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class... Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek... Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak... Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak... Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink... Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain... Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine... Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace... Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base... Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed... Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad... |
you want a battle you know how the story-go's
you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’ RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it?? The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self "never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health 500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar" gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash" Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see "drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off" 15 min, good luck fam 1st bar: Http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201011 |
nice verse,
i can admitt i think you came harder then I so good battle, if i lose its cool nice spit-box-'in with ya upp'in for votes |
Voted For: GKillaz05
iight yo... GK gets this cos his verse was just dope....he had a nice structure and his whole verse just had a tight flow...punches hit hard and metaz were decent...vocabs werent loaded but at least his own was better and talking about the wordplay they were quite interessting and good...fraud dont space ur bars it makes the structure and flow wack...no offence dude but u not to this guys knee...Gkillaz killed this with a complete verse,i mean his verse had what it takes to win a decent battle...gd looking :thumbup: rtf on http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=204885 ^ me vs what ever it takes -wun |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
gkillaz-Your verse was good to read, you had good multis...that made me like your verse the most...you had good intact punches that hit hard...and good back up personals..that were appealing...your structure was tight...i was able to cop a good flow man......overall..8/10 Fraud-Yo man your verse was not very good to read.You had messed up structure that was hard to follow.up on ur structure for real yo...your punches were iight...some concepts played....u had a couple good personals man...your flow was tacky...hard to get....your verse lacked a lot...overall 6/10 v/gkillaz05 rtf within 48 hours or this vote is dq'd |
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This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
You're starting to annoy me.
After I battle K.S. we're going to battle. |
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