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Zone Out 09-30-05 06:38 AM

Gun Check ft. Young T
 
A track me and my boy did a few months back.
its all good, I go first then he goes
also, at the end of my verse, and in the beginning there's feedback or some shit, I DONT KNOW HOW THE FUCK I GOT FEEDBACK!
But iuts not horrible, I promise
check it-check-it-check it out
www.soundclick.com/zhowneowlt

Zone Out 09-30-05 06:48 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...stpost&t=209939
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...stpost&t=210088

Blay'all 09-30-05 10:39 AM

*listening*


Intro cool, Im feelin the beat... JUELZ!

Kinda bad quality on the whole song, like beat and vocals... not sure what thats about...

Your flow is pretty on point, lyrics decent... for some reason the hook sounds really bad though...

Second verse - much better quality, really nice flow...


Overall decent track.

iamthatdude87 09-30-05 08:34 PM

beat is dope word.....your flows cool.....damn quality really holdin you back...emotion is gud word best i heard all day today lol....i like your flow lol anyways hit me up for a collab or sumthin...word

Zone Out 09-30-05 11:13 PM

lol, people keep sayin our quality is different, I dont know how..
Young T is a nigga in my NEIGHBORHOOD!
He came over my house and we used the same mic and everything.
so.....blah
anyway, thanks for all the feedback...
uppin..

~Lady Fiya~ 10-01-05 02:43 AM

Word, your flow pretty decent... lyrics straight... the chorus sound weird cus it sound like this whole track was in one take. I love this beat... Not bad at all... The quality just messes wit the track somewhat other than that, decent.

-The quality don't sound different between the two of you, it just sound like you recorded, and did no engineering to your vocals but lined up the vocals and uploaded it.

Zone Out 10-01-05 02:49 AM

wow
lmfao
you hit it right on the nose
thats all I seriously did
This track is kinda old, so it was kinda before I really got the hang of CEP2
Thanks for the FB, LF

Van Ished 10-01-05 02:52 AM

Flow is decent, on the hook some parts are a lil off when they say "1, 2". Young T could've prolly paced himself and it would've sounded better, instead some of the lines seem a lil rushed. Maybe use some punch ins. Decent track, quality hurts it a lil, but it's not that bad.

~Lady Fiya~ 10-01-05 02:52 AM

lol... well if you need any help with engineering on CE, hit me up on AIM.

Zone Out 10-01-05 02:43 PM

uppin.
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Zone Out 10-03-05 03:02 PM

^What that sexy dope ass nigga said..

Zone Out 10-06-05 05:29 PM

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Tha Q. 10-10-05 09:20 AM

Kryo?

ur a fuckin moron...and a closet case


beat is good though

ur mic is shitty quality...ur screaming...and there's distortion

ur flow is fine

rhyming is cool

Jay Z like rhyming


not bad

not great = ehhh



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