Kamze vs Satans spawn
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-30-05 at 06:06 PM

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Kamze has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-05 05:07 PM.

Satans spawn can't handle me, he can't stand the venom that i inject,
And this bitches lyrics like a broken light bulb......they never connect,
Spawn thinks that i'll be commin soft, but i'll be comming at him rough,
And being sick all over the place.....is the only time you'll be spitting sikc stuff,
He can't handle my game, he scared of what i'm about to spawn,
I'll give him nightmares, ....and he'll wake up telling people what he's sawn,(like spawn but no p)

Satans Spawn has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-05 05:24 PM.

This was feedback posted for Kamze
 

boooooo at stanza claimin hes a newbie,

not bad kamze lad, but middle bar was played to fuck.

I Got This Battle Man It Seems Like You Tried To Hard and Your Rymin Was Off

Yo votes up c'mon peeps. Ill RTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Satans Spawn

kamze:
Satans spawn can't handle me, he can't stand the venom that i inject,
And this bitches lyrics like a broken light bulb......they never connect,
^^ok, not very original tho- 3/10
Spawn thinks that i'll be commin soft, but i'll be comming at him rough,
And being sick all over the place.....is the only time you'll be spitting sikc stuff,
^^NO, u'd only be sick if u were sick? just NO- 0/10
He can't handle my game, he scared of what i'm about to spawn,
I'll give him nightmares, ....and he'll wake up telling people what he's sawn,(like spawn but no p)
^^haha, like spawn wit no p, is that the best u can do at a play on his name? 0/10

Total- 3/30

satans spawn:
You Couldnt "Beat Ya Mission" So Ima Beat Ya Till Yu "Missin"
And Ill Watch As Your "Mind Leaks" Like Your "Ear Was Pissin"
^^pissin ear? dont like that punch much- 1/10
People See That My Deep Precision Is To End This Slacker
He Couldnt "Loose Me In a Battle" Even If He "Took Stackerz"
^^ok, some good wordplay there- 3/10
Im The Top Smacker On The Wacker So Watch As I "Master"
This "Bate" Like I Was "Beating My Dick" So They End Faster
^^another ok punch, gets a point for multis- 2/10

Total- 6/10

Basically, Satans Spawn wins
better flow, better punches
kamze's punches were a bit off, but he is new at text
accepting a "newb battle" was sorta a bicth move by spawn, but w/e, he won it

vote- satans spawn

rtf to at least 1 of the links in the sig please :thumbup:

Hes Not a Newb He's Had 8 Battles total but Anyway

Ill RTF

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Voted For: Satans Spawn

v/satans spawn

satans spawn-your verse was well structured, u had good flow, good multis and hard hitting personals and punches...pretty much 1 sided battle..u had a sick verse..overall 7/10

kamze-meh ur verse is ntohing special..yet u inquired iight punches and personals, structure was a problem...couldnt quite get a good flow..other than that it was iight 4/10

v/satans spawn

Aii Then Man Thanx


We Still Uppin ....................

Voted For: Satans Spawn

Kamze

Satans spawn can't handle me, he can't stand the venom that i inject,
And this bitches lyrics like a broken light bulb......they never connect,
Uhm... Ok I Guess. Doesn't Really Make Sense As A Broken Light Bulb Can Still Connect, Just Don't Work....
Spawn thinks that i'll be commin soft, but i'll be comming at him rough,
And being sick all over the place.....is the only time you'll be spitting sikc stuff,
No. Repeated Sick And Was Just Weak N Didn't Make Sense.
He can't handle my game, he scared of what i'm about to spawn,
I'll give him nightmares, ....and he'll wake up telling people what he's sawn,
No. Sawn Isn't A Word. Saw With An N?... No. That Does Not Work.

Overall - Pretty Below Average Verse. Most Of It Just Didn't Work Or Make Sense. In Fact, All Of It Just Didn't Work Or Make Sense... I Was Bein' Nice The First Bar.......

Satans Spawn

You Couldnt "Beat Ya Mission" So Ima Beat Ya Till Yu "Missin"
And Ill Watch As Your "Mind Leaks" Like Your "Ear Was Pissin"
Ok. Not That Good Of Wordplay. Pretty Basic And Kind Of Dumb, But It's Ok.
People See That My Deep Precision Is To End This Slacker
He Couldnt "Loose Me In a Battle" Even If He "Took Stackerz"
Doesn't Make Sense. Well, Kinda... But Pretty Weak. Punch Is A Bit Played. Just Not Feelin' It.
Im The Top Smacker On The Wacker So Watch As I "Master"
This "Bate" Like I Was "Beating My Dick" So They End Faster
Blah... Not Feelin' That Kind Of Wordplay. And Some Of The Multies Are Just Unnecessary/Forced And Bring Down The Value Of The Verse.

Overall - Not Much Better Than The First, But It Was More Polished. Some Better Attempts... Not Quite Comin' Out So Good, But Oh Well.

Vote - Satans Spawn - Neither Was Too Good Or Hard Hitting, But Spawn Gets It For Having A Bit More Polished Verse And Better Attempts. As Well As, He's Just A Bit Better Than Kamze,.. On A Higher Level. Below Average Battle, But Spawn Takes This. Both Keep Battlin' And Elevatin' Though.

- Death

Thanx for RTF .................................................. ............

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