Tha Notorious D vs wyteknyte
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
3-0 tko

No DQ'in votes no matter wut!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-01-05 at 09:52 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

wyteknyte has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-05 09:23 PM.

ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-05 09:28 PM.

Dis mo'fucka got all his wins off newbies.....dawgs straight herbin it lmao :laugh:

Dawg you battle newbies religiously,:laugh:im given you a beatin
Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin
I stop and laugh :laugh: ,you throwing a punch is hard to see
On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me
Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb
Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb

Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race
Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace



blah blah blah....aint nuffin

I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap-
When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab//

HIV is the only thing about you that's positive
Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive//

Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see
But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me//

I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame
Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game//

I could see your future and it aint no record labels
A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables//

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*fables-a fictitious narrative or statement

wyteknyte
BeAnToWN rEp




Posts: 240
Joined: Jan 2005
From: boston (u.c.)
Status: Online
Text Record: 2-0 IP: 0825 899A


Dis mo'fucka got all his wins off newbies.....dawgs straight herbin it lmao


dis guy is not serious im straight herbing it wtf.........u must be outta ur mind......uppin 4 dis shyt

^yo dawg for future reference...just hit quote....saves time..and looks prettier lol...and y up it if its at the top? ne ways...............

Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap-
When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab//
i give this a 7.5/10 i didnt really feel this

HIV is the only thing about you that's positive
Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive//
8/10 good punch i really liked this line

Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see
But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me//
9/10--had good punch on this he took a shot at ur hometown...

I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame
Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game//
8.5/10--nice i liked this line...this is my favirote

I could see your future and it aint no record labels
A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables//
8/10--good closer....nice way to use your multi

overall: 41%


Dawg you battle newbies religiously,im given you a beatin
Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin
i give this a 8/10...nice punch

I stop and laugh ,you throwing a punch is hard to see
On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me
this line is always being used now...5/10

Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb
Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb
7/10...its was ok....ehhh

Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race
Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace
5/10 bad closer was not feeling it at all....

overall: 25%

vote goes to tha notorious for he had better flow structure n punches......

gud lukin out u got any open battles so i cud RTF...?? i seached but no but just post the link
uppin 1-0 c'mon....i want dis shyt to finish

Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

this battle was weak as hell for real and i swear i didn't see a single proper punch in this.....all attempts at punches ended up coming across as statemnets n shit so that aint good.

wyteknyte you seriously need to reconsider if you're intending on coninuing to write rhymes because that was pathetic

notorious d i didnt like the way you majorly stretched your last line, that fucked up your whole flow for real but as i actually saw a couple attempts at punches i'll give this to you as it seemed that you were actually tryna make your punches connect....didnt work though but you blatantly put the most effort into your verse

v/notorious d

na man i forgot to indent dis was supposed to be a mutli but w.e i forgot but yea ayo dont you think youre a little to new to RV to be telling people that shit w.e uppin for dis shyt

This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
 

poll z

this is simply pathetic, his verse has no punches......anyway uppin

Voted For: wyteknyte

tha notorious d-overall man, your verse wasnt that dope..your structure needs upping....and your vocab and multis were soft and weak....you dissed his hometown...thats played and weak..you need a better concept for that...overall ur verse was weak and played...4/10

vs

wyteknyte-your verse was good, i liked how you proved your point with the links and you incorporated good personals...your punches were soft, but still present in the battle...your multis were absent and your vocab wasnt so great..your last 2 lines was mad funny, cuz his structure is just like that so thats a good personal...overall 6/10

Voted For: wyteknyte

WyteKnyte-Your verse was pretty dope, im feelin the personals...you got em good wit the newbie line..your punches was iight...nothing special.....but the last 2 lines basically got you good man......your vocab and multis was absent but your got this 6/10

tha notorious d-man your verse was whack...no hate but you dissed boston....uh oh...shits played and whack.....you need up your punches and personals....man...your structure was iight..i got an ok flow...vocab and multis need to up...overall 4/10
v/wyteknyte