ThA NoToRiOuS D vs flow verse
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 K.O 4-1 K.O Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-02-05 at 12:42 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-05 12:13 AM.
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My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime
Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush Hitting you and your town like a bum rush And flow verse whats going on through your mind? Too late, you're falling too far behind just a quick verse drop holla atcha boi |
flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-05 12:36 AM.
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Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell
Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell” Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack” Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up |
ok.......uppin.............that was funny to read..
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good luck man.........
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yeah gud luck.....uppin 4 dis bytch.................
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Voted For: flow verse
Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up vs And flow verse whats going on through your mind? Too late, you're falling too far behind battles very even, but tha notorious D came slightly stronger in this. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: flow verse
one sided notorious d's 2nd and 3rd bars weren't even proper rhymes. most of his rhymes were just .... how do i say it ...... ah yes.... STUPID AS HELL his flow was below average and concepts were just weakness. anyway moving swiftly on flow verse actually had one decent punch in it unlike notorious d He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack” the setup was shit but the punch managed to slightly clip him so i suppose that won it for you seeing as nothing else stood out in this battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanks for votes upping
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lol ysdat voted for the wrong person.........imma report that
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just notice that go ahead and get changed.............upping for votes still
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This was feedback posted for flow verse
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