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"Remember Me" feat. Chris Roberts (STUDIO TRACK)
My first track under 360 Records, produced by CEO, Eddy Blackman, featuring a rookie cat called Chris from London, he was tryin out to get in, I got in, unfortunately he didnt but he got sum flow....
Im on 2nd verse....and also, we didnt do the noise reduction or any other mixin yet, but it sounds perfect apart from sum paper rustlin in the first 6 seconds, peep game http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209951 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210168 WWW.SOUNDCLICK.COM/INTERMENTAL ITS CALLED WILL YOU REMEMBER ME |
Intermental, you still up for that "true colors" collab...I'ma get it ready by next week if you still wanna do it...
Feeling the beat, nice sample in it. Chris got mellow voice, his flow is pretty good, adlibs add another dimension to track. Lyrics of first dude are fine. Aight now you, flowing beat nicely, wasn't too easy to spit on actually, lyrics fit the track. Maybe more commercial type of track but it's nicely put together though. Something for the ladies probably :) Keep it up man, you definitely improving compared to in beginning... |
Yepp thanks ma, im always down, get at me when u dun ure ishh....
and ill hook my bit up asap, bby the way i did the adlibs :) |
this was a nice track for real......other dude sounded young for real but you both held it down so keep it up.............
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where is this record company based??
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thanks black..and thanks acuity for ure fuckin shit feedback and it is based in st. albans and camden
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Fuck you you fucking gooch clamp....
You fucking suck. Stop messing up tight beats with your fagness. |
Give some real feedback you fagott
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love the sample on the beat....
the first guy needs to work on the presence n delivery definitely..... his flow is decent...but still could use some touching up.....seems like he tries to rush his words in some points....lyrically...its ok..... the background ad libs are ok...i dont think they add a whole lot to the track though... 2nd dude....presence is better.....but still could use some work... flow could def use some work....u pause a couple times to let the beat catch up.....cant really understand what your saying....flow gets off at the end also.... quality isnt too great... overall the beat was coo.....its was an ok track...both of you need to work on a couple certain things and youll be straight...just keep elevating... PLEASE return the favor.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210373 |
beat is goodchris lacks emotion, flow is ok but drifts off too often, adlibs sounds really fucked up, lyrics are average... ur vocals sound fucked, u sure its in a studio??? deliver n emotion still lacks... flow sounds rushed at time, lyrics are average again.
doesnt sound studio quality at all tbh... i have far from studio set-up and get better quality, so if this is studio, they need a whole new set-up. track is ok i guess, but as i keep sayin u need to improve ur emotion, n build confidence on the mic e.t.c/// keep at it tho |
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Hasnt been mixed yet....... |
rtf foo.........................lol
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