Black Dragon - Listen Up
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210206
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my quality was really bad on this track.......but otha than that 'preciate da feedback............

http://www.rideinconline.com//play....&mode=song_hifi
or
http://www.rideinconline.com/bands/466/

pz

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uppin..........................

Listenin'...

HEY I used to this beat too haha...

Quality is bad, but at least you admitted it...

Flow is decent...choppy in places...but decent overall...maybe make your lines a little longer...Delivery is good...overall it was decent just polish up ya flow a little...

Keep it up...

'preciate da feedback.........................

We should do a collab by the way. :cool:

yea man that'd be strate..........

Listening......

like the beat...heard it before on soundclick....

yea the quality is horrible...but u know that....

when you stack your verse....then over dubs are too loud....

DAMN @ how short this is.....................

your flow could use some touch ups....its not BAD...but its not great either....work on switchin it up some....and gettin more complex with it....

Delivery and presence is ok......


decent....


PLEASE return the favor on my song....FireMan.......itd be much appreciated

Please return the favor on mine too...

"Oh So Lovely"

Thanks...

aiite consider it done.....................

my bad...didnt see you already returned the favor.......thanks

Beat: loud as hell..decent though
Flow: WTF...all that HISS in ur vocals...u didn't hear that dawg?..flow is basic
Rhyming: basic
Delivery: better than ur flow...but still lackluster


Overall: not feelin it



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