Mike Mcguire Diss
 

Mike you a bitch you a fagit to,
I'm a nigga dat jus do what i have to do,
its cool, them joe niggas gave da tabs to you,
but its time for the Doc to cut ya ass in 2.
Ya bars ain't nothin, nigga straight frontin,
pussy now i'm given a chance to say somethin,
when i spray i ain't talkin guns and clips,
but ya mom, sprayin cum on her tongue and lips.
And nigga you a fraud the kiddo is big boss,
big dog and yawl ya shit a bit soft,
youngin take a little more time and get smart,
cause really i ain't mad at you, I'M PISSED OFF.
Swallow ya pride admit who da nicest,
who da righteous and i won't spite ya,
tellin ya friends to vote steal my shine,
you lucky i don't find you and steal ya moms.
Still in time the voters gone know it,
know I'm gone show it, you fagit ass rodent,
ya bars ain't potent they weak and ya phasique,
build it to its peak for you get in wit da beast.

who the fuck is Mike Mcguire?

any link?

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Ok..I'll give ya better feedback.
First...you say it's a diss to mike mcguire...well..where are the personals?This whole verse was comprimised of general disses.And some of ur shit didn't even diss.seems like you were just talkin about killin him.This sposed to be a diss OM..not a gore one.
Work on adding personalization to ur verses.