caged animal
 

my links i replied to..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210490
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210500
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210554
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210570

ahhh, im outta my cage!!!!

i had to come and bless the place/
i rap so evil you will have to test my faith/
shit hits the fan as soon as i enter the floor/
grab the mic and start to dismember this whore/
remember before? i came and you rendered to the lord/
hands together on ya knees cuz you tender to the core/
i gotta drop this kid right after i pop his lips/
blood gushing from his face asking me not to hit/
the block is thick with cops and shit/
so i killed him and they couldnt spot the bitch/
when i spit, im bound to hurt you/
you couldnt beat me if rappin was ya best virtue/
i come with heat, you best stay out the kitchen/
i hit you one time and your face is continually twitchin/
i must tell the truth, rapping is my mission/
so when i start rapping its like i strapping ammunition/
you cant stop the force if your not on coarse/
so one wrong move could blow ya flesh right out ya pores......


this some shit i wrote while i was bored, holla back 1

anyone? holla back

this was tight the multi's was tight but you need vocab homey a little too simple harly any imagetry to speak about but keep on dropping you will become much better but still i enjoyed this rhyme doe keep it coming

i knida liked it a little
it waz straight
rate it- 4/10
best line had to come and bless the place/
i rap so evil you will have to test my faith/

well it waz short