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Magic5 10-10-05 12:28 AM

-Cezar- vs. Sin`cere
 
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Texxus 10-10-05 12:44 AM

-check in-

g'luck...

AssasSINation 10-10-05 03:38 PM

yea check....

ur goin to need it....lol......and drop on time too....

Texxus 10-10-05 05:17 PM

We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams

blah...bored so i key'd mine up now

AssasSINation 10-10-05 08:12 PM

Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left
Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death

EXPLANATIONS.....
Ok right like im right and at the same time talking bout directions "left"
and Cezar, J(u)lius that i killed him with knives....julius cesar died from being knifed....and seeing death is his OM in his sig....kinda of a good explanation....lol....

Texxus 10-10-05 08:20 PM

i dont see why you had to explain it...pretty simple

Spektikul 10-10-05 08:38 PM

V/Cezar.............. for having the better bar...

Ps. You dont need to explain 2 lines with 4 lines.

Vaskez 10-11-05 11:42 AM

We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams
^^man saying his jams are deaf ain't really a punch, also jams doesn't rhyme well with stand

Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left
Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death
^^this is a much better concept, poorly executed, don't just throw wordplay in like the left right stuff for the hell of it, make it work, make it funny/witty, make it have a point

v/Sin'cere

N.Tavarez 10-11-05 11:45 AM

v/ sincere

slightly better, even though the explanation almost killed it
cezar def jam lines arent effective in PL battles

King Solo 10-11-05 01:48 PM

V/ - Cezar

both bars were pretty much as weak as each other.....

but then Sin`Cere explained his, so it made it wacker

MaRVJay 10-11-05 03:20 PM

v/ sin`cere...dat def jam shit was super wack lol

BloodVenom 10-11-05 05:56 PM

Pretty close...but honestly...I gotta give it to cezar
His one seemed to hit more as a punch.
Sin 'cere was too technical......try to avoid explainin ya shit too..

V/Cezar

noname 10-11-05 06:00 PM

^^^Ooh shit....I forgot i was still logged on that account..

it's me...just to let you know...

Texxus 10-11-05 07:30 PM

hotshh! n marvjay are'nt in the league?...so there vote cant count

AssasSINation 10-12-05 02:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by -Cezar
hotshh! n marvjay are'nt in the league?...so there vote cant count

ohhh they arent????.....

Quote:
Originally Posted by -Cezar-
i dont see why you had to explain it...pretty simple


aint this swaying????...ok then....Either count them or DQ....i think...if mimesis think so...cuz i do think this is swaying????


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