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B To The D 10-11-05 01:14 PM

The Day The Condom Broke
 
In relationships, teenagers often take the risk
Of being faced with kids, when the rubber breaks or splits
They embrace & kiss, it's great and his
Semen's pulsating quick, to taste her lips
Giving fate a twist, it burst the barricade of Latex
So much for the apparent term of safe sex
A million sperms now racing the final course
Along the vaginal walls, where life is born
The prize their fighting for, soon clear in sight
As the million white cells start veering right
Up the felopian tube, as its sides then spread
And each sperm looked to fertilise the egg
Finally one succeeds, the racing's through
Encased in goo, he'd found a place in her womb


The Female

Recalling the night before, as he touched her breasts
Knowing they'd do nothing less, than succumb to sex
That one wave of right, could change her life
She had a gut feeling, one that something lay inside
Late that night, she prayed beside her celtic cross
Hoping the pregnancy results had tested wrong



The Male
Regardless of the previous night and them being dead close
To the father, she was just another notch on his bed post
Music was his first love and his gift in the art
To exist with the stars, has them drifting apart
He told her flat out: "Girl, if you have the kid
Then goodluck and all but I wont play dad to it"


The mother spent the next few months juggling her options
And decided when the time came, to put it up for adoption
This was the worst she'd felt, having to give up her own son
But figured it was probably for the best in the long run
How wrong she was, the reason this is easy to state's cause
Ive witnessed this first hand. I was the child they gave up
Do you know how it felt? Alone, scared and worse
Growing up in a hostle, no clue who your parents were
I've no beaming rays of light, nothing here'll change my mind
The day the condom broke, was the worst day of my life

This Was Originally For A Battle But Dude No-Showed It's Not That Good Erm...Post Feed Plz

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B To The D 10-11-05 02:40 PM

uPPing...................

PrahJect 10-11-05 02:52 PM

Vocab meh, flow good, structure good, concept good, liked it, feelin it......keep shit up....1....8/10

Payn 10-11-05 03:04 PM

damn homie i gotta say diz is nice from how u should both people in there sitautions ....vocab was good, structure on point, imagery was there, & emotion spread thru-out tha whole piece sorry it happened 2 ya cuz i know how u feel cuz i'm 1 of those kidz also so keep ya head up & keep writing dez joints here damn...u get 9.5/10

B To The D 10-11-05 03:51 PM

Yeh Some Situations Are True Bit's Arent Built Up From My Bad Experience It Aint All True It Was Lucky We Didnt Have A Kid And Thx For The Feed Man Upping This Isshhhh


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