Paranoid - "Hip Hop Freestyle"
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Pretty nice i'll give a better feedback later.. ima about to hit the crib...
since im in Flawda... 12am.... rite now... |
its pretty decent.....flow goes off beat.....but thats not the easiest thing to do in a freestyle......your flow fell off at times......you reused words to much but it was pretty dope for a free....i liked the beat......but yeh man its pretty good :thumbup:
keep it up fam |
i love this beat so you better bring justice on this famz
*listening* lMFOA @ the one, two, one, two umm. you sound like you just reading and not even rapping. shits boring. you need to put more emotion into it. but ay ur new to the audio shit.. but i cant even tune into ur lyrics cuz its on some robot shit 4/10 you'll get better |
haha thanks for the feed yea haha Kon you had that robot sound before ayy, I'm workin on emotion and flow right now, its hard to just get in one day it'll come in time.
anyway thanks for the feed uppin |
dumb shit
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you are a dumb shit when freestyling ts the east to stay6 on beat newb |
yo yo wtf was thaty yo i never wanna hear that beat again becuase it'll remind me of this, LOL j/k just work on your freestyle alot more watch tommrorow night iw ill drop a freestyle with this same beat..lol you will listen to the difference, lol wordness
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^haha, I'm glad you didnt start hatin cuz we were gonna collab before and obviously you didnt care and I'm even better now.
uppin |
w/e yoh i aint even gona beef bout some bull ish but yeh to me it felt the flow went off beat....not the whole time not all the time..just a certain points because it seemed you struggled to keep flowing....and thats why i said it went off beat at times....and sorry i dont do audio so i wouldnt know freestyling is the easiest way to stay on beat...i just assumed it wasnt....sorry i assumed wrong.....but w/e yo uppin for my fam. :thumbup:
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whooooooooooooooo this beat off da hook kin folk! i like this beat! u got this one i got to give it to you on this one!everything was on point the beat was nice as u can see and read!and the skill was there NICE job this was a good piece!~1~ RTF
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props trace
uppin, leave links y'all |
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