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Untraceable 10-12-05 01:06 AM

The Worst Feeling
 
Yeh Drop ya verses in here

here is mine

The Worst Feeling

My feelings are at there worst because my heart has burst
And now the tears emerse, im broken and this isnt the first
Another hurts done.......from a different person
This isnt the first but..........this is the worst one


Once again I've become attatched so passionately to another
Jus to disocover lies were covered, just like every other lover
Your deception left my face smothered in tears, I can't believe
Decieved for the last time, I need to concieve a way to some relief
I was so naive, I couldn't percieve what was being done to me
I recieved the worst feeling because I wore my heart on my sleve
Grieving the one who decieved me, thought we had a sort of meaning
Didn't think you'd be the one leaving, ya left my heart open and bleeding
Nothing as it seems I guess, I don't know if i can handle all this distress
Your heart was possesed to infect mine and it was done with such finesse
I couldn't let it transgress, ya took me to the limit, its time for an apology
I think I deserve one, its the least ya could do, when I gave ya all of me
Swept off my feet, balance left wobboly, but nothings being said in regrets
But don't forget, what goes around, will come around at its worst I bet
For leaving me upset, I hope ya end up becoming a silhoutte of youself
So ya can live on knowing ya hurt me, and it was the worst feeling I felt

Os1ris 10-12-05 01:16 AM

I like it vocab was on point...your flow was choppy trying to use so many multi's fav line "I couldn't let it transgress, ya took me to the limit, its time for an apology
I think I deserve one, its the least ya could do, when I gave ya all of me"....but overall good piece man.

Untraceable 10-12-05 01:17 AM

^^thats my nig....thanks for the lookout.....but lookout for the full drop.....i hope tomoro :thumbup:

Implicit 10-12-05 01:23 AM

this was pretty good man. you had some good multis. and not just any multis. they actually made sense. cant wait for the full version with Mr. Multies and Malicious.

Kawn Flixx 10-12-05 04:01 PM

Word ill get mine up ina bit.

Untraceable 10-15-05 02:36 AM

hurry and get these verses done....come on now....:thumbup:

XM 10-15-05 08:24 AM

my fault i was extremely busy..............sigh i'll type something up right quick and i'll just match your lines not plan'n on do'n anything special i just need some time to get used to this site

XM 10-15-05 09:17 AM

The Worst Feelin

I aint gone lie it's intrigue'n me.............in love she was feelin me
But it seems that the tendencies.......of the brain currupts memories
All i want is for us to be...........its enough for this meanless being
Til I came to conclusions.....like why the fuck i keep dream'n dreams
See im livid, another page.................surpass'n my trouble'd days
Un-seen to the concepts...................so i grasp'em in other ways
The last of these ruckest games.......... everlast'n this fuck'n phase
Trash'n these visions...............she's show'n passion to other names
My feelins was outta place.......................an emotional dislocation
Just a friend with priveliges........................ima social association
Guess it was known from the make'n......... suppose to kno our places
But she took everything from me......................a total depredation
But over time...it corroded and molded........cuz it was my only option
Everything i held true, was her, but all things fresh are soon to rotten
Rose from depression, stress from the thorns, this un-needed nonesense
Could careless if she cheated, just no harder pain then to be forgotten


bout 40mins or so i pretty much just rushed.........sorry fo it being so late it'll be betta next time but ehh

XM 10-15-05 09:18 AM

and yo trace wats good with that sig...........i doubt i can use an avy right now lol but ehh

Kawn Flixx 10-15-05 03:41 PM

Damn im falling behind ill get mine done tonight..thats my word

XM 10-15-05 04:35 PM

damn lmao ya kno i usually do betta then that most of the time it takes me like 20 mins to do 20 lines thas 1 line a min but ehh.........fuck it its still decent oh and ups to Trace feel'n it homie

Kawn Flixx 10-17-05 11:35 PM

Damn sorry about this homie i got mine :)..ill post it soon

Untraceable 10-18-05 01:47 AM

yeh you better hurry i wanted this posted last week =/

XM 10-18-05 03:58 PM

so whatcha think............bout my verse............its meh to me lol

Untraceable 10-18-05 04:05 PM

yeh its aiight...i think you coulda made it better......obviously you still have time to cuz mal is takin forever for his verse....-_-


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