banks vs Lil C
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
one day check in time
verse dropped 1 hour after check in

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-13-05 at 01:07 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-05 01:08 AM.

Lil C

You’ve been here ova a year yet still a light weight
Ive been here two days but im soon to be great
I‘ll have people bobbin they’re head
Soon as they comprehend wat they read
Since eminem made it big and acquired all this fame
You think since your from Detroit you can do the same
In every battle you’ve done from wat ive seen
It should be nothing but a thing fo me to split ya spleen
For ya kid you aint the best role model
Cuz you still think about bout fuckin smokin or openin anotha bottle

Lil C has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-05 02:00 PM.

Get ready for war…as I bring gore with machetes and metaphors
I’ll sever this whore, vertically slice through his body to settle the score

Your submitted to this rap style that’s transmitted through comp fibers
I stomp liars and ‘shock’ cats as ‘spark pliers’ touch with the mic wires
Horrific with the white mask when I knife tracks like Mike Meyers

I'm topping this banks hoe.. bullets covered in coke; dropping this dope round
There's no stopping this war now; this kid's about as live as a 'ghost town'

I’ll squash you like lard, smash your face when my punches split right through ur guard
Leaving this rook-scarred…kid is staring at rocks, thinking that he looks hard

You’re prone to have your back blown, smack your wack tone single handedly
Watch me spark-these-cats and smash-knee-caps while ya sing your melody

My mic is loud and lethal, you’re off point like a shattered needle
Plus your mind frame is too feeble the beatings persist in the sequel

This battle’s like a ‘perfect division’ cause in the end you ‘wont remain’
The pro just came, your flow is lame, damage is something I don’t sustain

Scientifically I combust brains…with rust chains I swing and bust veins
I must claim a trust fame walking through dust plains as I cuss names

I just reign(rain) with no sunny days, starting raids with my cunning ways
I'll leave this dummy blazed n his tummy grazed as I slice with running blades

If this was ‘Christmas’ you still couldn’t ‘rap(wrap) gifted
I get the axe lifted, strike hard enough to leave your back twisted
....Smash hard fisted, my superior flows would have your tracks drifted....blah

This was feedback posted for Lil C
 

............................pollz................. ............

omg uppin dis shit.........................geesh ppl dont sleep

Voted For: Lil C

Lil C

Get ready for war…as I bring gore with machetes and metaphors
I’ll sever this whore, vertically slice through his body to settle the score
Not a punch..
Your submitted to this rap style that’s transmitted through comp fibers
I stomp liars and ‘shock’ cats as ‘spark pliers’ touch with the mic wires
Horrific with the white mask when I knife tracks like Mike Meyers
Not a punch..
I'm topping this banks hoe.. bullets covered in coke; dropping this dope round
There's no stopping this war now; this kid's about as live as a 'ghost town'
Played out..
I’ll squash you like lard, smash your face when my punches split right through ur guard
Leaving this rook-scarred…kid is staring at rocks, thinking that he looks hard
Played wordplay..
You’re prone to have your back blown, smack your wack tone single handedly
Watch me spark-these-cats and smash-knee-caps while ya sing your melody
Not a punch..
My mic is loud and lethal, you’re off point like a shattered needle
Plus your mind frame is too feeble the beatings persist in the sequel
Didn't connect..
This battle’s like a ‘perfect division’ cause in the end you ‘wont remain’
The pro just came, your flow is lame, damage is something I don’t sustain
Not a punch..
Scientifically I combust brains…with rust chains I swing and bust veins
I must claim a trust fame walking through dust plains as I cuss names
Not a punch.. just random multis..
I just reign(rain) with no sunny days, starting raids with my cunning ways
I'll leave this dummy blazed n his tummy grazed as I slice with running blades
Still not a punch..
If this was ‘Christmas’ you still couldn’t ‘rap(wrap) gifted
I get the axe lifted, strike hard enough to leave your back twisted
....Smash hard fisted, my superior flows would have your tracks drifted
Ehh..

Banks

You’ve been here ova a year yet still a light weight
Ive been here two days but im soon to be great
Not a punch..
I‘ll have people bobbin they’re head
Soon as they comprehend wat they read
Still not a punch..
Since eminem made it big and acquired all this fame
You think since your from Detroit you can do the same
Man, it's still not a punch..
In every battle you’ve done from wat ive seen
It should be nothing but a thing fo me to split ya spleen
Not worded into a punch..
For ya kid you aint the best role model
Cuz you still think about bout fuckin smokin or openin anotha bottle
Not a punch..

Overall, this battle wasn't very good at all. Lil C had a verse full of lines that didn't have punches. It was just a bunch of compiled multis and mostly played wordplay. However, banks' verse had no punches, no multis, and no attempted wordplay. Both, Lil C and banks, need to work on their punches, but for this battle.. Lil C won.

Vote - Lil C

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This was feedback posted for Lil C
 

Nice Verse Lil C!!! Like Ur Metaphours And Multies In Dis, Good Job U Got Diz!!

Get Em Gurl :shoot:

lol thanx fo da feed Rah.....uppin dis shit........

Voted For: Lil C

Lil C def. won this one but good punchlines.

uhhh banks was a little too simple and basic.

vote-Lil C

Voted For: Lil C

ummmmm i dont think an explanation is needed really

but...

punches->lil c
wordplay->lil c
multiples->lil c
creativity->lil c
flow->tie
metas->lil c
humor & enjoyment->lil c

overall->lil c


both need some improvement but Lil C definately took this battle, one sided in my opinion

Voted For: Lil C

this is easy lil c had more puches and tried more punches
V/Lil C


Banks i wanna battle u 6-20 lines u up to it

Voted For: Lil C

I'm topping this banks hoe.. bullets covered in coke; dropping this dope round
There's no stopping this war now; this kid's about as live as a 'ghost town'

VS

Fuck all......


Lil C threw punches

banks didnt.

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