Defined vs Legend
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
10 min to check
30 to drop
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
house
blind spit


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-13-05 at 07:39 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-05 07:16 PM.

Defined has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-05 07:16 PM.

dont understand personals please dont vote.....and ONLY explained votes please

ill kick your mouth in to disable all your lectures
killa??...sure..eyes blind bumbs on the texcture
reflection alone believe worthlessness in mirror
defined legend worth a 1000? must be new era
your verse shows noobs the worse way to suck
name yourself legend??...then why FL you duck
believe in the Aftermath of your drop discretion?
wonder why 50s eyes you allow as a protection
aight so you as good as 50..yall see what i see?
if shit was in a package......................................
....................he would be the one to out box me

kids been defined as whack since da day of his birth
classified as the whackest to ever walk gods green earth
i know this shit hurts,but can you deal with it
cause you aint da type that can just chill wit it
you get parinoid,like a crackhead ya cant stay sober
call me a demon cause to you its like the world is over
you look really cold like yo ass about to die
could spit a hot rhyme but dont want ya to fry
hyperthermia kick in,ya dead my work here is done
next time pack more heat before going against legend son

basic shit

hott verse uppin on this right here ya heard me yo

This was feedback posted for Defined
 

nice shit defined but I ain't votin. just tryna get this little kid to battle me. thats my name hoe.

umm aight thanks....if you change your mind please vote cuz shit be slept on crazy here...and word get at him bout that

Voted For: Defined

kids been defined as whack since da day of his birth
classified as the whackest to ever walk gods green earth
2...set-up and punch bassically said the same exact thing,for real.And it was weak.
i know this shit hurts,but can you deal with it
cause you aint da type that can just chill wit it
2...weak.
you get parinoid,like a crackhead ya cant stay sober
call me a demon cause to you its like the world is over
1...self glorifing
you look really cold like yo ass about to die
could spit a hot rhyme but dont want ya to fry
1....played out.
hyperthermia kick in,ya dead my work here is done
next time pack more heat before going against legend son
1...self glorifing

ill kick your mouth in to disable all your lectures
killa??...sure..eyes blind bumbs on the texcture
4....decent.
reflection alone believe worthlessness in mirror
defined legend worth a 1000? must be new era
3....bah..boring.
your verse shows noobs the worse way to suck
name yourself legend??...then why FL you duck
3....aah...ok...
believe in the Aftermath of your drop discretion?
wonder why 50s eyes you allow as a protection
4...ok.......
aight so you as good as 50..yall see what i see?
if shit was in a package......................................
....................he would be the one to out box me
6...yea..good bar.

Ok...one-sided battle

Legend..you need work.
U repeated urself,had too many self glorifing lines,and had too many played things.Any 'rhyme hot lines are played..so try to be more creative.Dont self glorifing in battles.It's oK in a set-up or sumtin,but not in a punch.A battle is to clown the oppenent.

Vote-Defined
Drop a vote in the link below plz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210976

aighht uppin #1 for some good explained votes thanks

Voted For: Defined

yo man this battle was a pretty decent one :D

Legend - this wasnt ur best battle, your structure was ok, flow was pretty decent, punches hit fairly hard but defined took that section, the structure was a bit stretched, you needa show more of ur vocab and wordplay skills... no hate..

defined - your verse was pretty hott man, nice structure, nice flow, good punches, vocab was nice, had some good wordplay n sum nice simple personals... nice battle

overall - defined...no hate..

coo thanks uppin 2 for explained votes..................

aight uppin 3 for votes explainede...i will rtf ..

aight uppin again lets get these votes explained please

Voted For: Defined

legend umm personals you could have done better structue was good rhyme scheme weak kindergarten shit work on ur vocab wordplay work on it didnt really like any of ur lines to be honest but hey everyone has good and bad days this was jsut a bad one keep sropping
defined not feeling ur personals either like the blind man line good vocab work on ur woordplay but not abd both werent that great
rtf or i will dq my vote
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