Ain't Nobody Fuckin Wit It...ft: L.AS & Twak
 

I'm first...L.A.S is 2nd...Twak(White-T) is 3rd

This is the first song I've done in forever so give me feeed

Ain't Nobody Fuckin Wit It
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...fm?bandID=33799

Songs I dropped replies for
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2486909
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2486918

The beat reminded me of a mainstream beat I just cant' remember right now.

First verse cme in super high energy energy and kinda tapered off a little as it went on, but the flow never slipped. The lyrics were suitable for this type of track. The lyrics weren't bad, but on the flipside, they weren't like "WOW!!" either, which woulda killed this track.

Second verse also starts off high energy and cools off. Honestly, the feedbakc for the second verse is the same for the second as well - identical. I cna hear the hook being pasted in after the second verse is over and it dosen't transition smoothly. The vocals on the third verse sounded about 2bD too high for in my Audio Technica ATH M40fs studio monitor headphones.

Third verse starts off the most hype but it picks back up agian slightly on the ending, but no where near the energy it started with. This for what ever reason made the verses seem liek they fell off. It's a "pretty good" song, but I tihnk if the flow was sritten to bing the pace back up at the ned it would have been a "great" track.

PS, nice clarity. What mics you guys using?

thanks for the feed....iono what they use....I use a shitty $20 headset mic....but Im gettin new equipment soon...shits gonna be official

beat is coo

I like the fast paced flows here

all came well


nicely done

I'd say just perfect delivery (tone of voice) with a fast flow...make it less monotone

otherwise...good



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word...


up

Boyz N Da Hood.


anyway, this shit surprised it.
IT WASNT WACK.
That fast flow was dope.
Check ya PM's!!

thanks for the reply

give it up for da new kats... y'all dudes is official!... lovin' da fast flow shyt... *niggaz actin' like they related to Twista or sum shyt!*... beat is cool... flow went well with it... one thing... second dude, LAS, shyt wasn't as clear as the other two... ES... good shyt for a 20 dollar mic... i'm 'bout to cop that new USB condenser/computer mic (studio quality shyt)... shyt's dirty!!!! i'll send ya the specs when i find it again... werdage... holla

Damn hot shit homie will you drop on a track on my mixtape homie hit me up wit a pm if u will or add me to aim-Mcartist945