-CEZAR- vs shodown
 

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6 - 12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


LET'S GO HOMIE BRING THE HEAT..... :thumbup:

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Check in by: 10-14-05 at 10:36 PM

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shodown has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-05 10:37 PM.

U dont pose a threat, Ill "swerv" ya left...Take out a plate & serve ya death
Beat this purv 2 "deaf"...Multi's smuther ya steps, So preserve ya breath
U da type 2 beg, Run but I snipe ya leg, Gun'd down w/ double pipes 2 head
You only hott if I light ya "thread", Keep u laid out like knife 2 bread
U don't wanna rumble bro, cuz I'll make sure u get pummel'd ho
Run wit the win? u fumble yo, Fist 2 chin 2 make u stumble doh
I'll infilitrate your fort Demolish you easy....im the calvary stallion
You wanna battle?! You and what army? Bring your whole battalion
Desecrate ya bars, berate and leave you irate from my war tactics..
you couldn't be insane on the mic if you took my style and tried to "straight jack IT"
You couldn't "throw up" an "ill diss" if you were miserable with cancer..
Like AI hiding from cops, your response an "evasive Answer"..

-Cezar- has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-05 11:13 PM.

C'mon I'll smack him fa-SHODOWN,And this be onlytime he got flow(floor)
Ya style the funtype,Cuz they all used like kids with play-dough
You committing 'CRYHMES',nah he a lier,Never will catch a buyer,Cuz
Our eyes run over ya lines,Cuz they waisted,Like over used tires
Newbie please......you a girl to me,I'll snap on ya umbilical cord
I say this,Because im trying to prevent another bitch from being born
Drop ya in a split-second,You rap ill?then why ya record hidden?
Cause ya to have 'stomach ache',The way these lines come in sittin...


lastline you gotta think about... :hump: lol


anyways quick drop

Voted For: -Cezar-

cezar-Your verse was structured well, i was able to cop a good flow out of it, you incorporated good punches into your verse as well as wordplay and personals....last line was pretty funny...had me thinking, but i still had it....overall 7/10

shodown-Your verse wuddnt that bad, you had som decent punches in there...some good multis...but this is not a multi battle, and u lacked in creativeness and punches...overall 5/10

v/-cezar-

rtf link in sig....1

This was feedback posted for shodown
 

both of you have fucked structure lol
but as far as punches go sho got it easy

:rolleyes:thanxs willa for your comment.....upppppppppppppppppppp

Voted For: -Cezar-

breakdown


Flow-
Goes To Cezar he basically Came a Little more organzied that Shodown and he keep his lines spokenly and visually neater than shodown

Punchez-
Def Goes To Cezar His last bar Was The Killer In This battle which gave him the upper hand compared to shodown
shodown seems to have alot of reused concept

Personals

Neither one of you had any real personals But the only hard hitting personal in this battle was the one that cezar had at the begining dissin CS which is his crew so that was the only GOOD personal in this battle

multiez
Noone had any mutlies like talk so I will not judge in this category

Vocab-Goes to shodown his choice of words was way better than Cezar its like shodowm had a dictionary beside him

Originality-
Goes to Cezar his verse was Way more original as far as concept and punchez goes he had the usual pesonal diss like a diss to your crew or your rec which is expected in every battle so that wasnt the originality that won him this battle

my v/ goes to -Cezar-

Please RTF ASAP or this vote will get removed

Pretty Please rTF Please !!!
all i Need is one more vote for the KO
Im not Tryna away you or nuttin

but Atleast Hit the battle up

This was feedback posted for -Cezar-
 

Word checkin polls for famo..ripped it

This was feedback posted for shodown
 

.......................pollz...................... ......

dont see why people check polls.if you wanna see who winning check my sig our check out statistics

Voted For: -Cezar-

Sho:


Desecrate ya bars, berate and leave you irate from my war tactics..
you couldn't be insane on the mic if you took my style and tried to "straight jack IT"

That was dope, youor only decent diss bar though.

Your verse was a more decent flow thing and lacked punches, you need to aim to diss your opponent more mate.


Cez:

Newbie please......you a girl to me,I'll snap on ya umbilical cord
I say this,Because im trying to prevent another bitch from being born
Drop ya in a split-second,You rap ill?then why ya record hidden?
Cause ya to have 'stomach ache',The way these lines come in sittin...

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Both came weak here, but cezar came with more creative concepts although the bar i c & p off sho was ill.

No Hate

Vote Cezar...

PLEASE RTF IN SIG ASAP

This was feedback posted for shodown
 

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