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shodown vs Malicious.
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-17-05 at 10:31 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
shodown has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:32 AM.
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You ain’t got the balls or lyrical stamina. This gon be an Eazy KILL.
I’ll murder you, your wife, and kids.SHIT YOUR FAMILY call it"Amityville" I’m the type to cut my hair funny and worship a 3 Stooges statue. Spin my head counterclockwise and spit green pea soup up at you Shave my ass crack with a Norelco, and glue the hairs to your chin. Pass you off as Osama bin Laden, and collect the award for capturing him. I’m down to ruggedly bump uglies. My ass to your face. Give you a taste of the shit I talk when I’m belligerently rockin’ the place. I’ll stomp on your grave and hump that fake angel on your tombstone. Punk Kelso from That 70s Show while we smoke 2 bones ‘til we too stoned. hahaha KOOL lets GO!!!! |
Malicious. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:39 AM.
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dont write it homie BLINDSPIT THIS SHIT...........
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Lets Play Around
This could be a good battle smf?..but who the fuc is shodown.. Trying out for TL..thinkin your good..But your ass got HOE'D-DOWN.. Trying out for every clique,To bad for C.S Your in there crew Quote:
Time to get to work You say you a writer / poet..but your wack and you know it.. Now everyone in rv Can see sho, Get his neck slit..and his skull split,like i got a worker's permit Everyone knows Your the biggest crew hopper RV Has ever seen... Cus the only time sho gets 'down',is when he has a wet dream Why dont you 'sho'your records..is it that bad..or is it so-so? Smf sorry to put 'down' But with a 2-10 record i would have left rv along time ago..! Pz. |
hahaha....ya had to dig all that shit up huh...just too hit me good.......
nice drop........ ok lets get them votes in... |
Voted For: Malicious.
shodown...what the fuck are you thinking? You'll probably disqualify this, so I'll make it nice and long: what in the fuck are you doing? This must be some kind of mix-up and you thought this was a 'throw as much random shit as possible in and hope people mistake it for a punch', because I ain't seeing you being serious in this situation. Though Malicious didn't come that hard at all, it's pretty easy to say who this went to, mainly because he wasn't messing around. Mal.'s good lines Quote:
Mal's bad ones When he was messing around sho's good ones ... sho's bad ones I'd rather and not copy and paste the whole thing. I have no clue what sho was thinking, but he wasn't trying or needs to stick to topical. Quote:
How would his family call it something if they were dead? Malicious had punches and personals, and a bit of wordplay, but shodown just went for something like comedic value or was just being a dumbass like I do. Mal's verse was better, shodown: elevate or leave. Your record is worse then mine. :\ |
Voted For: Malicious.
Ma vote Goto Malicious. He Had better punches also he used name play used personals flow was nice shodown verse was nice but i thought the punches was played flow was decent but still need elavation no personals so ma vote goto Malicious. |
This was feedback posted for Malicious.
you murder him....C's Up all day...werd
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Ha word...upping for some more votes..................
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Voted For: Malicious.
shodown's verse was funny but not "ha ha" funny. its as if he was talking all that garbage to make up the line limit or something. i ain't hating at all cos i ain't got a problem wit shodown but i really feel his verse was lacking real punches and actual creativity. he tried humour with the 3 stooges/ pea soup line but it really didn't work too tough. and that line about sticking your ass hair to the other guys chin was just the kinda shite that an 11 year old would come out with. Shodown you need to come with personals next time, and improve your creativity and vocab, and start using multies, you've been here long enough you should have a fair idea of how to start using them malicious had a basic verse as well but he had quite a few good personals in it so that basically won it for him IMO. that was funny the way he used shodown's quote against him, and there was a fair attempt at word play with the "wack and you know it" line. so v/malicious |
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Voted For: Malicious.
This could be a good battle smf?..but who the fuc is shodown.. Trying out for TL..thinkin your good..But your ass got HOE'D-DOWN.. 4...aah,don't use links in punches,and the punch could have hit harder. Trying out for every clique,To bad for C.S Your in there crew Quote: Originally Posted by shodown Please let me in TL..i know i need elevate yes it true 6....good personal Time to get to work You say you a writer / poet..but your wack and you know it.. Now everyone in rv Can see sho, Get his neck slit..and his skull split,like i got a worker's permit 3..meh,wasn't feelin this...seemed more like threats Everyone knows Your the biggest crew hopper RV Has ever seen... Cus the only time sho gets 'down',is when he has a wet dream 5.....decent Why dont you 'sho'your records..is it that bad..or is it so-so? Smf sorry to put 'down' But with a 2-10 record i would have left rv along time ago..! 3....punch need better wording..and i wuzn't feelin the intial usage in the set-up. You ain’t got the balls or lyrical stamina. This gon be an Eazy KILL. I’ll murder you, your wife, and kids.SHIT YOUR FAMILY call it"Amityville" 1...this didn't diss malicious in any way I’m the type to cut my hair funny and worship a 3 Stooges statue. Spin my head counterclockwise and spit green pea soup up at you 1...this didn't diss malicious in any way Shave my ass crack with a Norelco, and glue the hairs to your chin. Pass you off as Osama bin Laden, and collect the award for capturing him. 2....osama lines are played I’m down to ruggedly bump uglies. My ass to your face. Give you a taste of the shit I talk when I’m belligerently rockin’ the place. 1...this didn't diss malicious in any way I’ll stomp on your grave and hump that fake angel on your tombstone. Punk Kelso from That 70s Show while we smoke 2 bones ‘til we too stoned. 3...meh...weak. One-sided.. Malicious... Decent spit.Next time,try to aviod putting links in battles,people just hate to click on those.The quote punch u had was the best one IMO.Some of ur punches could have hit better wit wording..but...it was still good. Shodown... WTf @ all the threats in ur verse.I bassically got bored during it.Sayin ur'll murder his family and call it amityville does NOT diss the oppenent.And sad thing is...95% of ur verse was made up of threats. Vote-Malicious DROP A VOTE IN LINK BELOW PLZ. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=209572 |
Voted For: Malicious.
RTF HERE -----> http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=208859 Or Vote Will Be Removed. Malicious: Much Mo Complex Than Shodown More Creativity In Yo Verse And Ive Neva Seen Da Quote Thing B4 *Jacks It* Good Job Hommie U Get My Vote Shodown: Yo Verse Was Coo' 2, Not As Much Creativity In Yo Personals And Dats Whut I Base My Vote On, Malicious Had Da Far Betta Personals, Both Had Aight Punchez Jus Step Yo Wordplay Up A Lil Bit Shodown RTF PLZ, Vote Goes 2 Malicious. |
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