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PrahJect 10-16-05 10:02 AM

...Intermental feat. Implicit - Hey Mama...
 
A very upbeat emotional track dedicated to my mother...implicit siings his heart out...

beat : smidi beats

1st verse: Inter
Hook: Imp
Bridge: Inter
Hook: Imp
Last verse: Inter
Hook: Imp

Thas the order.....

www.soundclick.com/intermental

"Hey Mama"

http://commmunity.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211703
http://commmunity.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211705

B To The D 10-16-05 10:05 AM

listenin....dope beat dope singin by implicit rofl as always ya flow is dope inter..good presence good delivery good shit man proly ya best eva like it lot lol its dope good drop ...One.

PrahJect 10-16-05 10:06 AM

Thanks I apreciate it

Dickard. 10-16-05 11:05 AM

yo man, i feel the singing...actually sounds good ...werd

inter man...for some reason i dont like the way u flowed....maybe its just me...i feal sometimes u forced words but other than that this was a dope audio...keep it up 1

PrahJect 10-16-05 11:42 AM

Thanks...............

PrahJect 10-16-05 01:42 PM

upp...................

Speats 10-16-05 02:17 PM

beat is funny lol dunno, aint really feeling it, but still, singing is so so, sometime u mess up man, nice inter, dont like the second voice sayin : huh huh lol dunno, heard that to much you know, chorus is cool, aint really feelin it , mmm dunno aint your best track man no hate but true, beat seems like messing up at some times, anyway seven out of 10

PrahJect 10-16-05 02:20 PM

upp......................

PrahJect 10-16-05 05:00 PM

upppin............

Tha Q. 10-16-05 05:05 PM

1st off...beat is pretty coo

2nd...Implicit can not sing...don't ever put him on another track


3rd...I like the sound effect of the kid "read me a bed time story"

Your flow was pretty decent here...nothing major one way or the other...

Lyrics seem personal...so, nothing intricate lyrically is required...


chorus comes in again...**contemplates suicide**


ok...2nd verse, u entered on the wrong beat, IMO...got back on track

track jumped in a couple spots...cud have been my computer


not a bad track...not a great track = decent...would be better with a better singer and a flow that was more consistent throughout the track

6.8/10



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