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Theory vs ColdSTEEL
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting explained votes only.. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-20-05 at 10:57 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 10:59 AM.
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Theory has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 11:18 AM.
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aiight quick key....
this Lame been askin for a Loss,A bit strange? His Nick Name should be Edwin...cuz theory gets tha Big Bang! Imma make this quick mayne..Cuz,Werd!..Im not worried. Cuzo its sorta like Botany..Tha way I got this herb burried. an Hurry?...Fah what,Imma hit em clean an hand em stars. Theory tha rappin vendin machine..why?..he keeps spittin out candy bars! This cant be hard...Hear me when I say Imma damage this youth. An throw this Theory out...wit an "L",cuz I just hand em tha truth.* This battle is a e-z win..I dont no why he wanna push me back. He better off battlin a mouse,Cuz he aint nothin but a pussy KAT! *Theory means fact...Fact can be changed,but tha truth Remains Hey it was quick...P.M. fah any explaination. |
VOTE ON QUALITY, NOT QUANTITY
Look, you aint good dude, and here im the boss So i'll take the win and let Cold-Steal... the loss Everyone knows i'm iller son, my writtens ranked higher Plus I can watch Steel have a meltdown just by spittin' fire When I say I fuck ya up, it's the truth I make ya feel kid Cuz it's just so fucking easy to metal with steel, bitch Straight throwing punches at ya chin till ya develop a cleft & everyone knows CS aint been shit! Since all their best members left Peep member title too, colossus? Get tossed pest You can bring your boys and take the co-loss,S Don't provoke me son, cuz i'm crazy when im pissed off And since Memphis got the Grizzlies, you can Bear this loss But when it comes to basketball, I bet you be the ball hog So i'll beat you so Brown, you can Coach with Hubie dawg! *Hubie Brown coached the Memphis Grizzlies, he's from Memphis |
LOL @ Theory meaning fact, omfg, are you stupid? A Theory is not a fact, it's a hypothethis more the less, wt/v, your prolly a fucking stupid redneck or some shit, and your verse sucked. I win buddy.
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^Hah!...Theory is based on fact,Idiot!...an Redneck?...w/e. uppin! |
An your lines are played as fuck...cold-steal,an tha C.S. punch is way played,but coo..drop...fah ah Fag.
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This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
tight battle here.............
just checkin polls... |
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No a theory does not have to based on a fact, god your stupid. |
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^wtf!...what school do you go to?...No they dont have to be based on it...but it is supported by fact. Uppin this... |
Voted For: Theory
this Lame been askin for a Loss,A bit strange? His Nick Name should be Edwin...cuz theory gets tha Big Bang! 3...big bang?..I ain't feelin the fall-of in flow. Imma make this quick mayne..Cuz,Werd!..Im not worried. Cuzo its sorta like Botany..Tha way I got this herb burried. 3..first line seemed stupid in my opinion...2nd line is OK,but herb lines are a lil on the uncreative side. an Hurry?...Fah what,Imma hit em clean an hand em stars. Theory tha rappin vendin machine..why?..he keeps spittin out candy bars! 5...decent punch, This cant be hard...Hear me when I say Imma damage this youth. An throw this Theory out...wit an "L",cuz I just hand em tha truth.* 3...W/L lines are pretty much played,unless ya doing something creative with it. This battle is a e-z win..I dont no why he wanna push me back. He better off battlin a mouse,Cuz he aint nothin but a pussy KAT! 4..ehh,kinda played out concept as the punch. Look, you aint good dude, and here im the boss So i'll take the win and let Cold-Steal... the loss 5...decent....but steal the loss?..To me,it sounds like ya kinda dissin yaself as u sayin he's stealin the loss from you..meanin before this battle,your a loser.But..maybe it's just me readin into it too much..decent line. Everyone knows i'm iller son, my writtens ranked higher Plus I can watch Steel have a meltdown just by spittin' fire 5....decent,but steel lines against him are a lil meh. When I say I fuck ya up, it's the truth I make ya feel kid Cuz it's just so fucking easy to metal with steel, bitch 6....good wordplay. Straight throwing punches at ya chin till ya develop a cleft & everyone knows CS aint been shit! Since all their best members left 7...dope diss/personal.. Peep member title too, colossus? Get tossed pest You can bring your boys and take the co-loss,S 4...forced,co-loss,S?..NO..say it in real life,it won't work.Make sure ya wordplay is homophonic at all times. Don't provoke me son, cuz i'm crazy when im pissed off And since Memphis got the Grizzlies, you can Bear this loss 5.....decent punch,but 1st line wuz direct filler. But when it comes to basketball, I bet you be the ball hog So i'll beat you so Brown, you can Coach with Hubie dawg! 4...aah,ite. Ok...good battle. Coldsteel.. Didn't like ur verse that much.U had bars that didn't rhyme,like the big bang one.You also had some played shit.Like..W/L lines are now played.So unless ya got something creative with it...don't use it.And the.And the pussy cat line...played.get more creative. Theory.... Ok..decent verse.Some strong wordplay at times 'n shit.You still had a steel line,which is played.And forced wordplay with the co-loss-S one.But...you still had good punch..so..you win. Vote-Theory Vote on the Natural Killa vs Ghost battle plz. |
This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
ike ike ike
just checking da polls............................ |
Voted For: Theory
this Lame been askin for a Loss,A bit strange? His Nick Name should be Edwin...cuz theory gets tha Big Bang! eh.. ight Imma make this quick mayne..Cuz,Werd!..Im not worried. Cuzo its sorta like Botany..Tha way I got this herb burried. herb is a played meta an Hurry?...Fah what,Imma hit em clean an hand em stars. Theory tha rappin vendin machine..why?..he keeps spittin out candy bars! lol This cant be hard...Hear me when I say Imma damage this youth. An throw this Theory out...wit an "L",cuz I just hand em tha truth.* lol This battle is a e-z win..I dont no why he wanna push me back. He better off battlin a mouse,Cuz he aint nothin but a pussy KAT! decent at best Look, you aint good dude, and here im the boss So i'll take the win and let Cold-Steal... the loss dope, werdplays on point Everyone knows i'm iller son, my writtens ranked higher Plus I can watch Steel have a meltdown just by spittin' fire nice again When I say I fuck ya up, it's the truth I make ya feel kid Cuz it's just so fucking easy to metal with steel, bitch decent Straight throwing punches at ya chin till ya develop a cleft & everyone knows CS aint been shit! Since all their best members left not a really strong personal Peep member title too, colossus? Get tossed pest You can bring your boys and take the co-loss,S decent werdplay Don't provoke me son, cuz i'm crazy when im pissed off And since Memphis got the Grizzlies, you can Bear this loss dopeness But when it comes to basketball, I bet you be the ball hog So i'll beat you so Brown, you can Coach with Hubie dawg! decent V/ Theory.. Reason- doper punches, more complex, better wordplay. Overall he had a doper verse with funny ass nameplays and some dope werdplay at times. He takes this battle with an overall better verse. Word. RTF on this if you want me to kepp voting on ya'll battles- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211864 |
uppin....Theory got this.....Thanx fah tha votes an feed..
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