Talk_is_Cheap vs DaRk ReLiGiOn
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-20-05 at 01:25 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Talk_is_Cheap has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 07:48 PM.

wat u supposed to be the grim reaper thats y ur names darkreligion/
ill hurt u more than the jewish belief circumsision/
The only votes u'll be gettin is from donations/
my rhymes frustrate this kid like a head ache/
ill' merk this kid fast like a fat kid eating cake/
Talk_is_Cheap vs. Dark Religion this is simple/
ur not even noticed on RV like Esteban German in baseball*/
cause ill obliterate to a certain degree /
so u'll end up like stevie wonder u cant even see/
Think battlin me is gunna be elementary /
Dark Religion Me and u are complete contrary/
i'll miss treat u like a dutch hoe/
only way your gettin votes is if u cheat like Rapheal Palmero/


* guy who actually plays baseball but he sucks playd for on the texas Rangers

DaRk ReLiGiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 08:47 PM.

I come swarming with flows, warming your nodes, lyrical assaults dastardly and start storming your modes,
Conform the bestowed, I drop ‘Electric body Shocks’ to step up and own your ass like JailHouse Uniform Codes,
Your verse is inconsequential, this detrimental mental slips disks and flips scripts when I slay hides,
Never sentimental, but experimental proving your style has limited capacity like hard discs for A drives,
This Won is out of style like MC Hammer pants, Ill de-‘feet’ you to prove that Im looking at lames,
Booking your shame, rhetorical instigator is treating ya like a window and putting you in ‘pane’,
I swell flames alight, gasoline sentences ignite ideas and thoughts and proceed to tell shame plights,
Well claimed writes, battling a member from a gay crew and most of them cant even fucking spell the name right,
Rhyming in-a-stint of words in-a-sprint, instinctively lashing out in battles leave them walking with-a-splint,
In any rapping level imaginable I know Im ahead of Talk and thats without the time difference,
This Pathetic Emcee gets Ripped Conclusively, Incisions Seriously Injures this Opponents Nutrients,
The same Phonetic Ego Ravaged, Continuing Investigation Sees Illness Obliterating his Nucleus’,
The omnipotent definition of MC, the ever knowing ever flowing who is capable of wins and is quick to plan,
Lyrical heavyweight, with swift demands Ill throw you in the air to prove that shit hits the fans,
My tactics attack shit, I smack back quick against wack shit so practice to drop your weak façade of theatrics,
I pack equipment and trap flicks, burned like matchsticks as I hand out more Ls than dealers to marijuana addicts...

~Style Switch~

Defeatin-me is like readin-a-test you ain't studied for cuz you know your gon' fail before tweakin-the-text,
searchin ways too brake me is like Recess-in-quests you gonna need more then Metal Teeth before you'd b eatin-the-best,
I'll Insert-leeches-who-feed-on-this-guest when I Reach-deep-in-ya-chest i'm startin 2 feel-the-weak-in-your-flesh,
i'll punch with Illness that hurts the vortex of words worst then first-tuberculosis,
So let-me reverse cheap with flows of Osteoporosis that'll Split your Bones Faster then the work-of-mozes....

this sux i forgot to chang the line rule but o well uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for DaRk ReLiGiOn
 

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Voted For: DaRk ReLiGiOn

Dark Religion, don't ever do this many lines ago. Nobody is going to want to vote on this battle because of how bad your structure is and how many lines you did. Your lines are stretched as fuck.

But, on to the breakdown.. Dark Religion, you had some decent concepts (talk/time differences, Ls/marijuna addicts), but you also had some very played concepts, like the pane/window one.. Your vocabulary annoyed the hell out of me. A lot of people on this site would say it was good, but you over did it, big time. Some of the shit you said nobody would ever use outside of text battling. But, overall, you had some wordplay (some of it was forced to shit), a few decent concepts, and a overally decent verse. Also, take out all the "'s and -'s from your verse.

Talk is Cheap, you only had one decent punch in my eyes(cheat/palmero). Everything else you had was either played, worded bad, or just didn't connect. You had a lot of statements, which, in a battle, you don't want to have. You need to work on your wording so that they'd be punches instead of the statements. You attempted wordplay a few times, but for the most part it was either played or didn't connect that well.

Overall, despite the huge ass amounts of lines dark religion did, he gets my vote. He had more decent concepts, better attempts at wordplay, and just an overall better verse.

Vote - DaRk ReLiGiOn

Both of you you should sign up for the Punchline League. It'll give you a chance to elevate without messing up your record. You should check it out.

Wordness ima sign up......uppin.......................

alright kool ill sign up uppin.....................

Uppin............................................. ..

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Talk_is_Cheap

for not biten off rb.............................................

rtf

uppin.............................................

wait this dude bit then how is it 1-1 anyway uppin.