Sucidle Thoughts Part II
 

I have thoughts of suicide because my souls died inside
no point in living anymore all i can think of is my death
so all i think about is my very last breath in this world
i also realise that soon i might have a little boy or girl
so with this 9mm that i hold against the side of my face
i think im only 16 and my life was a complete waste
so im hesitent to pull the trigger and let the bullet come out the camber
i also realise my life is endangered theres not many
like me of my breed left so i contomplate on my last breath
then i say fuck it and pull it and squeese at the same moment
im on my knees praying to god for forgiveness
but why would he let me repent this sin that im about to commit
on that same note life is a bitch and its hard to survive
so why should i try when im living to die all together i lived a very good life.........

i want some feedback thanx........................

pretty upfront poem. No original wording. But I got your messege and the expression was obvious. So good job. :) keep droppin so I can put me two cents in.