Illist vs ~lextownkillaz~
 

RULES:
10-16 lines
10 min to check in
30 min to drop
blindspit
no crew votes
no love/hate votes
no rick ryder votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-18-05 at 12:36 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

~lextownkillaz~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 12:07 PM.

checkin in....................GOOD LUCK...........

Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 12:10 PM.

Yo..
Don't respect clowns, this cats the next down..
& I'm outta this world...
....................While this kids stuck in "Lex Town"
This kid aint shit, in this match he's comin short...
& you're outta my league?....
.............Mothafucka I'm in a whole different sport
Kid's fruity, Ya whole style? I'll fucken shoot it...
can't claim you invincible...
...................everyone knows killa's get executed
noone knows this lame, son your lackin the fame..
& I'll kill a lex town.. guess i really buried ya name
send ya to hell like the devil..kid'll get smacked back
& its true noones on ya level...
...............its actually pretty hard to get that wack*
My straps kill, you in the past while i'm passed ill..
kids got so many short shots...
............You'd think his fucking lines were half filled!
This kids full of fillers, I'm more criminal than killas
You are who you battle?..
...We all know that's a lie, you'll never be the illist
This battle'll be the end of ya faith....
& you want sixteen lines son?....
.........Stick to bars, so its a fact you'll get ATE

* - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=211953

you aint ready to battle.....your no where near
I can see already your shaking with fear

over top of yours my flow is perfected
your flow looks like shit...thrown together wreckless

my punches come straight up...back to back
your punches come straight up...wacker than wack

you supposed to be the illist...realest..cold blooded killa
but im sorry to say my fuckin dog* is reala

man look here dawg your a nobody know by nobody
your mama wouldnt want you to see this....its to naughty

I'll piss on you like a fat dude in a porter potty
you actin like you 50 cent when your just irv gotty

yo you wouldnt get recognition if you was a hero
but it dont matter anyway because your a straight up zero

this is blindspit but i can see that you aint spitin ill shit
you actin like you hard but you one of those pop a pill bitches

let the voteing begin.............................

wOW..10-0 on rb? lmao..

you're ass...

what you dont belive me well go see for yourself

my crew thread its got my record and posts and all that on there its the same user name

Voted For: Illist

~Lextownkillaz~

you aint ready to battle.....your no where near
I can see already your shaking with fear
Nah..
over top of yours my flow is perfected
your flow looks like shit...thrown together wreckless
Didn't connect..
my punches come straight up...back to back
your punches come straight up...wacker than wack
Concept had potential.. the wording was off though..
you supposed to be the illist...realest..cold blooded killa
but im sorry to say my fuckin dog* is reala
No way..
man look here dawg your a nobody know by nobody
your mama wouldnt want you to see this....its to naughty
Nah, there's no punch..
I'll piss on you like a fat dude in a porter potty
you actin like you 50 cent when your just irv gotty
Attempted wordplay.. played to hell though..
yo you wouldnt get recognition if you was a hero
but it dont matter anyway because your a straight up zero
Nope..
this is blindspit but i can see that you aint spitin ill shit
you actin like you hard but you one of those pop a pill bitches
Not a punch..

Illist

Don't respect clowns, this cats the next down..
& I'm outta this world...
....................While this kids stuck in "Lex Town"
Ehh.. Decent..
This kid aint shit, in this match he's comin short...
& you're outta my league?....
.............Mothafucka I'm in a whole different sport
Nah..
Kid's fruity, Ya whole style? I'll fucken shoot it...
can't claim you invincible...
...................everyone knows killa's get executed
Cool..
noone knows this lame, son your lackin the fame..
& I'll kill a lex town.. guess i really buried ya name
Ehh.. Not so much..
send ya to hell like the devil..kid'll get smacked back
& its true noones on ya level...
...............its actually pretty hard to get that wack
Pretty good..
My straps kill, you in the past while i'm passed ill..
kids got so many short shots...
............You'd think his fucking lines were half filled!
Nah..
This kids full of fillers, I'm more criminal than killas
You are who you battle?..
...We all know that's a lie, you'll never be the illist
Barely decent..
This battle'll be the end of ya faith....
& you want sixteen lines son?....
.........Stick to bars, so its a fact you'll get ATE
Pretty good..

Overall, lextownkillaz was just outclassed in this battle. Lextownkillaz had one decent concept, and the rest of his verse either didn't connect, was played, or just sucked. Illist had quite a few decent lines.. a few good ones.. and just an overall more solid verse. So, basing off of that, Illist gets my vote.

Vote - Illist

Lextownkillaz, you should sign up for the Punchline League. It'll give you a chance to elevate without messing up your record. You should check it out.

ok uppin for votes............and i didnt even try on this shit to be honest if you seen my shit on RB then you would know that but oh well fuck it and oh yeah let me correct what i said about being 10-0 make that 12-0

This was feedback posted for Illist
 

easy win again upppppppppin this shit you ned to get some of theses closed playboy lol

This was feedback posted for ~lextownkillaz~
 

lol aint u on Rb...and u get whored on Rv 2......pathetic

Voted For: Illist

ok Illest just killed this kid... *pulls out the yellow tape* this wasn't even close LK's verse was rather elementary... and Illest just crushed em in every catagory worth checking...

Opener: Illest
Closer: Illest
Punches: Illest
Personals: Illest
Structure: Illest
Flow: Illest
Enjoyment: Illest

Vote: Illest

Voted For: Illist

illist u were ill tonite u won this battle with those rymes they flowed nice too

lex ur rymes were weak but thats cus u had 15 mins but keep on elavating

no hate

rtf
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