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B To The D 10-18-05 02:22 PM

Ghetto Streets(My Best)
 
Check It Me On My Own

www.soundclick.com/unf
called ghetto streets

plz comment thx !!!!!!!!!!!!

left feed on From tHE Hood
and
What We About

Ghost 10-18-05 02:40 PM

Listening:

the beats nice, i like it my kind of beat,hook koo,wordplay is basic,but da rhymin is kewl,chea da rhymin kewl,still amazed from da beat!like da way u spitting nothing but truth!the rhymez are like a vibe to da public about how it iz inda ghetto streets!
hey dope drop
RATIN ( 1-100 )
quality=92
flow=90
stayin onda beat=89
wordplay=78
dope track=Yeah
me listening=DOPE
if it was my beat and my track=not good at all with da quality

but hey keep droppin dope shyt homie like ya shyt holla back atcha boy!

B To The D 10-18-05 03:29 PM

thx man uppin!!!!!!!!

Dickard. 10-18-05 03:36 PM

mmm, this was pretty dope man'

you had nice rhyme scheme....

yea beat was dope man im lovin the beat...your staying on the beat the whole time pretty much...vocab for an audio is dope.....flowed tight....pretty good wordplay...im feelin it quality of this track was dope also....upgrade man.....keep this ill shit up....1

B To The D 10-18-05 03:38 PM

thx man....uppin this ish!

Tha Q. 10-18-05 04:04 PM

what was up with the tunnel sound on your vocals at the start

they got better


your flow was choppy throughout

that has to do with your delivery and lyrics...I suggest writing your lines to continue past the 4th beat in the bar...that may help smooth out your flow

It was tough to understand anything you said


your energy was good though


Is that a hook? Well, it was decent


not a good track...not the worse I've heard

elevate dawg


1

B To The D 10-18-05 04:52 PM

uppin............................................

.Ike. 10-18-05 05:34 PM

hmmm listening..

quality is ok...not great...but ive heard much worse...

the hook actually is pretty decent...i think itd be nice if it was mixed right....and the quality was better...

your flow is decent...could use some touch ups....but thatll come with time...a lil bit choppy...but youll get the hang of it once you keep droppin...

lyrics are ok....Delivery isnt bad...you actually came with some nice energy in this....work on pronouncing your words more clear too...

keep elevating

K.ontroverz.Y 10-18-05 05:41 PM

listening:

umm naww...people would laugh if they heard that voice talkin bout ghetto streets

your flow wasnt good...lyrics i cant even hear shit...and the emotion wasnt dat good

the quality was shit....elevat famz

3/10

B To The D 10-19-05 12:00 PM

..............thx for feed ink...

Kamze 10-19-05 12:04 PM

Yeah the beatz dope i gotta say,
I thought the song was good overall, thought it was your best track so far.
Out of 100 i'd give it a 87/100.
Good song man.

B To The D 10-19-05 12:07 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Kon.Tay.Juz
listening:

umm naww...people would laugh if they heard that voice talkin bout ghetto streets

your flow wasnt good...lyrics i cant even hear shit...and the emotion wasnt dat good

the quality was shit....elevat famz

3/10



Did You Even Listen?well the quality was not shit it as ppl sed woz alrite emotion?Fuck You i put emotion in lyrics?listen more as most ppl heard wot i sed y cudnt u? u deaf?Fuck You Bout Ma Voice..One.

JRoy 10-20-05 08:24 AM

alright checkin this shit now........ the intro is decent........that voice gets annoyin......but the beats pretty hot......lets see here....your flow needs too be upped a lil cuz its kinda off...but its decent...your emotion is good and your presense could be upped a bit but sounds decent.....your lyrics are cool....you sound mad mad young.....where you from you sound like you from canada or sum...well this shits decent keep it up fam....6.5/10

B To The D 10-22-05 05:08 AM

Thx Chief And Jroy Im From Uk Lol I Dont Sound It tho......

PrahJect 10-22-05 10:03 AM

You come in, I agree with kon Tay with one thing, that ure voice dont fit this topic, but hook is nice...hook is very good...aiigh u come in...im not feelin ure precence or delivery atall..but flow is on point though....lyrics good..likin the hook...its catchy...lyrics on top here..2nd verse is much much better with delivery.....ok track....


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