EastSide Story
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=408622


SICK.I.AM SPITS FIRST
PEI SPITS SECOND
WYTE KNYTE SPITE THIRD
MYSTIC CHAOS SPITS FOURTH

....SO YEA LEAVE HARsh feed, its our first audio as a crew outside rapverse

I have left feed on Implicit Be you
and UnF Ghetto Streetz

Wasn't feelin it the quality isn't good off beat no offense u know just given u real talk feedback so just leave some real feedback some of the verses were good but the recording sound was bad

1st dude...needs to work on flow...its not horrid...but it could be touched up....also his presence isnt too good...kinda goes in and out...

2nd dude...flow is ok...but falls off at a couple points....delivery is better than first dude..flow falls off kinda bad right before u say..."my lyrical flow"

3rd dude...flows ok....delivery is horrid...and presence really isnt there...bring more excitement to the mic man......

4th dude...flow isnt too good...u got kinda of a robot flow...its really choppy n stuff...presence isnt great....bring more excitement too...gotta feel what your saying man....put emotion into it

^ thanks for the feed man.. appreciate it

thanks for the feed yo....uppin

all basically have the same problems.

so up your emotion. really. like a lot. you have to or else you'll all sound like some R2-D2 rappers.

flow is choppy. in many places, not just one particular guy.

^^thanks a lot yo


uppin i guessssssss

alright first up honestly aint too great....you need too up ya shit a lot......your lyrics are pretty bad.......2nd person is a lil better....your emotion needs too upped...lyrics are decent........damn upp this up a bit......3rd up you need too up your shit a lot at first you sound like u were tryin too do a hook you sound like you scared of the mic......4th you need too upp your emotion a lot......your lyrics are "ok" at best....u need too up ya flow cuz its boring...this track makes me wanna yawn fams up the flows i know yall can do this shit ya'll sound like me when i first started i can tell ya'll new too it.....so up and drop some more lets see what else u got
Overall-4.5/10

thanks yo uppinl.............................

Hmm.......I listened to this Is This Your first yu need to basically do what these ppl sed upp ya flow n put some emotion in make the listeners want to listen on or they may jus turn it off in the middle of the track you have a long time to work on it tho so jus keep on elevating........One

thanks man....werd up 1.

ur voice is gritty but robotic soundin

and are u talkin or flowin dawg

back away from the mic...heard a couple POPS


wassup with the phone sound effects?


flow picked up a little

not bad there

nothing special...nothing horrendous

eh


keep flowin


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