WTF i was tripping
 

aight im writing to this beat right now

aigth im writing the first verse right now
and before i know it i have 1 page

i was like wtf? theni counted the beat and it had i thnk 30 bars

i was like wtf? i dont know if the chorus is different or something, i cant figur eit out :huh:

30 bars too one song for one verse?? wtf

so how'd you explain Games 300 eh?

how would i describe it.....i'd describe it bad..i hate that G Unot 300 bars shit its gay but i thought he was talkin about just a reg. 16 line verse

im talkign about this beat i downloaded and it got 30 bars each verse, but it shouldnt have that many, its just i cant figure out where the chorus starts, shit is confusing me.....

start the chorus wherever....some beats dont have distince chorus's so most cats drop a 16 do a chorus another 16 ect.

nah becuase theres a sample in the beat where a guy says Prisoner a few times and thats the chorus....i playe dit on cool edit to see where it would be but i cant figure it out.........

yo if i drop the link will one of you guys listen and help me out?

the beat you listening to prolly had an intro, a regular verse, a pre-chorus and a chorus then another verse, pre-chorus, then chorus...


Some beats made like that as well

yeah drop the link........

i think lady fiya is right, i hope so shit.........im not sure if it has 30 bars but i know its more than 23 bars

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=293000

the beat is called prisoner

yup....

it has 24 bars the first verse.

a bar is every 2 claps.......so yea

i think i have an idea what it is but first i wanna here what lady fiya or anyone else has to say

aight intro is done at 0:30, when the beat kicks it that's the chorus...

chorus is done @ 0:50,
in comes the verse (regular amount of bars),
ends at 1:31 (pre-chorus is when the beat drops)...
actual chorus picks up @ 1:40... finished at 2:00,
@ 2:00 the 2nd verse kicks in.. (regular amount of bars)
ends @ 2:40

Your verses are 40 seconds long.. both are equal in length...
I'mma triple check that in a minute.

damn yo how you figure that shit out?

lol i was tweaking last night on this shit...LOL but hey...good looks....are they 16 bars? becuase 40 secs is kinda short but better for me
**ps im lazy when it comes to writing

yea i dont realy like how it transitions from chorus to the verse

it kinda is wack, the beat should change or have somehting...sounds too much alike