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Soul Changes Like The Season(Leave feed I Leave Feed)
yeahhhhhhhh www.soundclick.com/jayjking
"soul changes like the seasons" peep it let me know what you think you hit it up i'll get you back will edit with links links ---- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212091 --------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211961 --------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211452 --------- |
I think ur dubbing is a tad thick...I'd like to hear more of your exposed voice...but I like how you do your doubles on the rhyming words
flow is good and with such a poignant question, "I understand your fight do you understand mind" I think you could have been more expressive with emotion. beat is appropriate 7.5/10 good track...short but good 1 |
aight thanks fam..i'll get u on a track just drop a link or tell me the song
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212029 ^^My newest joint..."A Beautiful Gay in the neighborhood" |
i'm uppin lets get more replies
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Feeling the intro...
Beat is good, vocals may be bit too loud on it though or maybe it's because of your dubs...I dunno...I'm bad at the technical shit. Flow was good, had it on point throughout the track. Emotion can be better though, especially in the "chorus" thing...put more anger in it...put more soul into it you know...Lyrics were good, nice quality too, were very understandable. Keep it up |
alright thanks uppin for the feedback
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first time listening you
intro is cool flow is good. stays on point. lyrics are good because they sound real not like you're tryna play some kinda gangster. emotion is the only thing lacking. voice sounds cool. liking the mentioning of christ. |
thanks for the feed fam........
upppin |
quit sleepin this is a fiya track
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With the name of this track, I could tell this was dope....listening...
beat is good for the topic...im feelin it....liked the doubles like Q said...gives a good emphasis......... emotion imo is qgood.. flow is on point here... delivery and precence is good...im feelin it...8/10... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212455 please dont be like half the people on this site and rtf to the link above please |
thanks for the feed for reall....i keep my word tho i'll get at you right now
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aiight famz. im listenin [Intro] The intro is good. if you didn't say you was a white rapper i wouldn't even know you was white. I understand the message your sayin in your intro. alot of white rappers feel that way. But keep doin your thang famz. overall i give the intro 7/10 [Quality] The quality is real nice famz. its improved alot from what i've heard from your last song. I could understand every word clearly. no pops or anything and it was clipped nicely. the hissing i couldn't hear at all. what kinda mic you use? this shit is nice. overall i give the quality 8/10 [Beat] The beat is nice. nice mellow song. another song i would sit down and listen to when im going to bed. the pianos were nice on this. Im feelin the maracca's or whatever you call them things. this beat fits your topic and flow perfectly. overall i give the beat 7/10 Flow The flow was nice. it rode the beat perfectly. the emotion was also nice on this i could tell you put your heart into this track. and it payed off. the flow is nice. i could hear everything you said perfectly. you didn't rush any words. and you stayed consistant through the whole song. good job overall i give flow 7.9/10 Lyrics Lyrics on this track was really deep. I could understand everything you were saying. and it was real touching and a real serious track. this song would be excellent for an intro for an album or something. This is an all around nice track overall i give this track 7/10 |
alright good shit fam......i'll get u back if you gotta track droppa link
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wasent bad..kinda sounds like a more skilled paul wall LOL..not realy onto the beat,u have a nice dirty south flow and voice is decent tho,liked the chorus a lot man...
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