E.P Promo(jus some rough/in-complete shit)
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=211705&page=2
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203066

as some of u know.. im working on an E.P with my boy yezza from the crew im in Northern Soldiers... this is my 2 verses taken from a track off that CD, just waiting on him to get round here n record his verses e.t.c, then i can send to jabbathakut to add the cuts for the hook sections.

http://www.ukhhf.co.uk/jamroom/bands/16/

omg
you could've kept this shit..

???????????????

Haven't you used this beat before?..anyways i won't go into detail but i've heard better from ya and quality sounds good but could do with cleaning up hence unfinished i guess though :thumbup:

actually this is the best flow ive brought, more switch-ups in it, and alot more consistant aswell.... delivery isnt as good imo, but thats cos i was ill when i did it, which is why im re-recording it next week

ye i think it's prolly the delivery IMO...but drop the finished product though of course people gonna pick faults if it's not finished lol

i did it, n couldnt be arsed.

what i do is... post a rough version, and leave people guessin n wondering the finished outcome, then post it the day the CD is released lol

uppin..........................

beat sounds like something I'd flow to


I'm sorry...but Im just not a fan of UK rapper accents

I can't get over it

if someone "American" rapped like this I'd say they sounded retarded


I respect what you do...I jus can't get with it



1

beat is dope cant really make out what that perosn is saying but thats what you got to do for samples so dope

1st verse= flow is nice, i like how its got dope flow, word, rhyme shceme is dope but your lyrics are kinda wack in some parts, and i cant believe i can understand you yo, LOL but yea your lyrics need to be worked on and your back ground vioces are kinda sorry, dont like how you answer your questions,lol

2nd verse

woah you really ripped this shit, LOL wow kinda nice for me barely being able to understand you, LOL i like the flow its nice it fits beat perfect you could have had better presence like more harder like own the mic, exspecially since oyu spit with that type of flow...

can you Rtf the favor on the link i will up date this thread with

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=212412

RTF on this track

cheers... but lyrics wack??? lol ok... and Q.. no offence but you sounded retarded with that comment anyway

uppin.................

uppin....................................

i replied to 6-7 tracks yesterday, asked all of u to RTF n not one actually did... does that mean my next audio is posted free???