Bone Collector vs BiZzO
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-26-05 at 04:23 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

BiZzO has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-05 04:25 AM.

Bone Collector has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-05 04:26 AM.

man what the fuck happend to a 30 min spit.. man ima still key my shit to merk u.....

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Like Zeus and Hercules, this TEXT Legend a~GREEK~myth/
The truth behind this story, B ORALLY~sucks~dick//
So Bitch, the truths out, but theres still one Fact~thats~Missin'/
Tell me B, how many dick sucks it cost you to be~a~legend??//(Too Many
I rap like a~angry~husband, I'm leavin B's BITCH~lines~battered/
Empty Shells in ya mind, cuz your THOUGHTS~DON't~Matter!//
Your rhymes always get~pissed~upon, I'm ready to empty~my~bladder/
Turnin' you into~a~SCHAVO and watch your Braincells scatter!//
I'm know to extinct BITCHES, so your Life~is~endanger/
I'll splash ya brains on~the~wall, cuz beatin' CP is a NO~BRAINER!//

Close the Coffin.....

ok lets get sum votes on this battle damniittttt.....

Voted For: Bone Collector

hmm this was kinda close, whats the point in this slash and ~ shit??
Bone collectors last line was my fav in this battle..But some of your shit didnt make sense it looked like you rushed it..

Bizzo had a few played lines in that verse. was kinda lacking in originality. But this line was dope
"A loss To You Would Be A Sin, Look At The Nervous Wreck Your In
Even If You Were At The Peak, You Couldnt Even 'Top Tha Win"

Im gonna hav to go with bonecollector on this one caue of more consistant punches ...

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This was feedback posted for BiZzO
 

Wow at who voted for him with that ugly fuckin structure...

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Voted For: BiZzO

Bizzo:

I'll Just Smack This Dumbass Bitch, Ill Merk The Whack Prick
You Wouldnt Be The Illest Freestyler If You Was Hurlin SIck

Simple but Decent

Obviously, You Dont Know Who Tha Fuck You Messin With G
Dont Know Why I Waste My Time, Your Statz Are Still Rookie

Kinda weak

A loss To You Would Be A Sin, Look At The Nervous Wreck Your In
Even If You Were At The Peak, You Couldnt Even 'Top Tha Win"

Decent line

You Even Spelt The Callout Thread Wrong, All This Kid Does Is Mope *
Fuck What You Wrote, Only On Oppiste Day People Call You Dope

Alright line one of your best lines in my view

Its Been A While, I Said Elevate But Hes At The Bottom Of The Pile
I'd Say "Lol" But Its Not Funny , You Got Merked On a
Quick KeyStyle

Wasnt the best but an alright closer



Bone Collector:

Like Zeus and Hercules, this TEXT Legend a~GREEK~myth/
The truth behind this story, B ORALLY~sucks~dick//

to me was a filler and was thrown in to rhyme
So Bitch, the truths out, but theres still one Fact~thats~Missin'/
Tell me B, how many dick sucks it cost you to be~a~legend??//(Too Many

Decent line but imature

I rap like a~angry~husband, I'm leavin B's BITCH~lines~battered/
Empty Shells in ya mind, cuz your THOUGHTS~DON't~Matter!//

Stupid ass line and was weak

Your rhymes always get~pissed~upon, I'm ready to empty~my~bladder/
Turnin' you into~a~SCHAVO and watch your Braincells scatter!//

Weak and dumb

I'm know to extinct BITCHES, so your Life~is~endanger/
I'll splash ya brains on~the~wall, cuz beatin' CP is a NO~BRAINER!//

Alright line but still weak in my eyes


Bizzo>Bone Collector


Bizzo:Just keep doing your thang and dont get big headed thats all the advice i have for you.

Bone Collector:Elevate alot. And work on your punches. And find better content for your punches as well.

Good Luck to both. And Ups To yall

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Lets get some more votes in this battle please......

comeon FFs lets get some votes in this bitch please!!!!!