some multies i guess
 

i cant rock out or block out any of her physical features
blivital creatures we must be too trust thee
girls dont love thee they love the checks n there humvee
they want you dead filled with led in a body bag
we need u out the building before ur killin u copy that
living a sinful live filled with porno n murder and lust
but after the time you hurd the stuff bust who do u trust?
i can tell you one thing to bring nothin but bling
cuz u like girls with blonde hair with long legs who sing
and all they want is ur money so funny
cuz u love um and try bein as sweet as honey so trust me
get outta the siutation before the intoxication of marriage
cuz your bank account numbers really what u should cherrish
nah i dont mean it its god you should trust number 1 savior
he can changer your act even through some criminal behavior


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2506522

make you a deal, your missing two links, so leave feed here while i leave feed on your OM
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212502

anyway some parts didnt seem to make sens, i never really liked multis tracks cuz i feel like if i was typing anyway that was rhyming together you know what i meen, structure is not bad, flow is so-so at some places, overall not bad man, just aint feeling multis you know what i meen, peace out bro
7/10

even as an athletic child you couldn't be energetic and wild rund touchdowns and search grounds of success

Drop two links or this will be closed

*Moved*

i wasn't really feel'n the wordchoice here