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Arsen vs Wren-O-Phase
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-27-05 at 07:08 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Wren-O-Phase has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 07:08 PM.
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Arsen has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 07:12 PM.
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your mad weak n ya crew associate with geeks....
ya flow trash,wordplay garbage n ya shit dont hit like writin punches in greek..... your stupid you cant beat me so face it.... do like mase did get hooked on phonics and go back to the basics.... yu could "spit on the toilet" n still couldnt drop shit... how you going to beat me if your almost as dumb as your topics??... punch in ya face leave ya nose wit a scar... I would use hard-hittin personals but I dont know who the fuck you are... so life fucked up?? nope yu spittin text aint fair throw jabs to verse and we usually dont use "ARSE" unless theres a chair bar 3 - personal.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212619 |
Lemme Give You Da Run Down, Jus Frown...You "Add" Up To "Sum" Clown So When It Comes 2 Dis Round, Drink Lead...Cuz U Gettin GUNNED Down! Legendary Men You Praise, And Since Rap Dies...You At Ya Comin Of Age Keep Turnin Da Page, & Eventually U Wont "C-Life" With "Cum In Ya Face"! Slurp It You Luvin Da Taste, Ya "Trash Can't Rise"...As "Nipples Dat Waste" So Tity Just Brace, Yourself Before You "Lose Hope" Then I "Win Ya Faith" Talk Ah Big Game Thought You Hot, Until Ya Freestyle Stenched Da Site Mos Guys Dont Write, But U A Nervous Animal..Dey Wouldnt 'Urge 2 Bite'! I Gave Dis Fagget Life, Idolize His Challenger, Watch Da Feelings Collide But Wrens-A-Phase, & His "Verse Is DRY"....So Once You Clicked Dis Page .................................................. .........................His DROUGHT Samples Inside! Breakdownz *In Addition The Answer Is Called The Sum **When You Drink Somethin It Goes Down, Guns R Filled Wit Lead ***His Avy Is Michael Jackson Moon Walkin (Hes Ah Legend) ****Sperm Gives Life, So If You "SEE LIFE"...Someone Came In Ya Face *****Nipples Get Hard, Therefore They RISE ******Nervous Animals Hesitate, Ppl Dont Wanna Bite Him...They Hesitate Cuz He Sux *******Women Go Thru Phases (Menopause), So If His Verse Is Dry Its Sufferin A Drought, His LINK says "Free Text (Sample Inside).....So If You Came In Dis Thread U SAMPLIN HIS Drought BOOM |
Ahahahaha, Lemme See Sum Votes...Acknowledge This Piece
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Voted For: Arsen
OHHHH very easy battle to vote on.. very very one sided... Wren O - man your verse was really, really weak, the punches were shocking, you had no personals, flow was crap, the vocab needs to be upped a hell of alot, your structure was also very bad, i didnt like it at all.. so u needa elevate alot brah.. no hate.. Arsen - what can i say to u brah.. your verse killed him.. punches hit hard, nice personals, very good vocabulary, i liked ya structure although a few lines were stretched.. you raped this kid... Arsen > Wren-O-Phase Vote - Arsen.... |
Rape Is Such Ah Harse Word...Lol...Good Lookin Tho Keep Votin
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Jeah Lets Get Sum More Votes On This Piece...Too Ez
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its all gravy next time i'll come harder ..........
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Jea I Guess LOL........Nah But Seriously Vote Up Niggas
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Voted For: Arsen
ok wren work on ur rhyme schem and ur structure all of ur second lines are stretched like whoa no personals with the exception of a fake one and im nto feeling it try to put multis in ur lines and work on wordplay and creativity all of ur lines were played so elevate i like ur id diss u but i dont knwo who u r line the best lol elevate arsen good structure rhyme scheme much better from ur other battle wordplay pretty good personals good like all the multis i luved ur last line good wordplay and personal props |
Good Lookin Votin In My Battle Again Will....I'll Return It If You Need It
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Vote Up Niggas.....................................
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