The Rebirth-Dopest Track I Done
 

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listening...intro is hmm...meh lol...beat kicking in now..flows aight slight late in delivery...bit basic flow wise...beats ok...you sound quite young...flows ok but it needs switching up...coz it gets predictable after a while...also vocally it's ok but you sound monotone...use more variation in ya voice for ya next track...

it's an aight track you gettin better keep droppin :thumbup:

beats alright, not feelin the start bit gay lmao..

slows slightly off, hooks ite,

good emotion and pressence.

lol, kamze got a mention...he ma mate...

decent track overall just not feelin how it ends..

Thx For The Feed ...Upping!!!!!!!

Im not feeling how you spit ...Not saying flow was whack or lyrics were whack because its not its actually nice..But i cant really decipher some of the words sounds like you rap with your mouth closed or somethin...BUT just open it up a lil bit if thats possible..i hope its not no deformality or some shit to where you cant open your mouth all the way if so then im sorry . um...it seems like you've eleved greatly tho good shit since the first audio yea u have..good luck in the future.

LMAO No I Aint Deformed Lol Thx For The Feed!!!!!

I think u have a strong natural presence on track...if only u could harness that and perfect ur delivery with the voice, u'd have a winning combination


flow isn't bad


quaility is acceptable


hard to tell what ur sayin...articulate more...but keep ur flow smooth


decent dawg

keep at it


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Thanks man
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listenin...beat is nice...like sample at the beginign....hook is good...lyrically this track is dope..u got a natural presence if u get me there...but u gotta up the flow a lil...likin my name there :)...;)...emotion is good on this track...I think its ure best track so far..keep.up...

Thx A lot Yo Upping

pretty good piece here, i liked the flow and beat.....though the beginning was sorta homo ....i wont hold anything against you :) lol....lyrics were hard to come by......i got ''tha q aint incidental'' or summin like that overall 6/10....keep elevatin and doin ya thing...1

thx man upping,..................

Upp.....Diggity.Ima Do My Best Track Ever Tommorow Dont WOrry ;)

thats messed up. no shoutout to me?

beat is sooo umm weird. kinda cool. but the voices are scary

flow is much better. i remember when u couldnt even flow on beat. much better. oh damn i thought u said reefer instead of the rebirth.

again you start mentioning everyone BUT me.

oh wait. you did. right? like at the end of the verse. or was that just incidental?

the chorus - i dont like. its alright not really catchy. cant tell between the chorus and verses.

pretty good track man. rtf in the link in my siggy called He Watches Me

Ok Thx For The Feed man I Will Rtf Soon