.Compulsive. vs |||DRKMAN|||
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Blind spit

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-25-05 at 05:19 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

|||DRKMAN||| has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-05 04:59 PM.

.Compulsive. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-05 05:09 PM.

I'll tear through your lines like playin dot to dot with a knife
Over your spinal cord, it's like they pay to fuck your rhymes, this nigga's
Lines are whored, drop a rhyme, I'm bored, flows like Scratched math CDs i've heard this niggas shit "times" before
This hoe's flow's basic, average joe's prose's wasted
Nigga i can't spell your name without a "LOSE" face it.....

quick ting

*his name contains the word lose

peace gd luck

Exausted with words when i demolish his field like impulsive Mental Institues,
Never earning compliments, rhymings poor like " Save The Kids Tributes"
An explosin to your record when we cross paths no one can feel your raft,
Mentally Ill constantly repeating the same lines like PsychoPaths,
Pay Pals his bars from ebay just to make a 10 line verse,
straight punching this clown leavin him with more colors then Starburts,
Gutting this Dickless bitch with priceless lines, strangle you with ya own embilicle cord,
I'd dismantle you in seconds if i was being serious... your lucky im bored,
Im the war lord of rap, the king of the hill, your gonna get whored,
watch as the crowd claps, I count my earnings, then dice ya head with a sword,

Votes #1

uupin #2 Lets get some votes in this battle to get it closed.

This was feedback posted for |||DRKMAN|||
 

you lost...but i ain't voting...why?
cuz u gon think it hate...

YA HEAR?!?!!

uppin for honest votes. #3 lets get this closed.

Voted For: .Compulsive.

I'll tear through your lines like playin dot to dot with a knife
Over your spinal cord, it's like they pay to fuck your rhymes, this nigga's
Lines are whored,
kinda strectched....not real good structure here
drop a rhyme, I'm bored, flows like Scratched math CDs i've heard this niggas shit "times" before
aight...i like that
This hoe's flow's basic, average joe's prose's wasted
Nigga i can't spell your name without a "LOSE" face it.....
forced...

breakdown-your verse was aight...your structure had me all over the place so it wasn't an easy read...battles you should be tryin to get straight to the point with punches and personals.... 3/10

Exausted with words when i demolish his field like impulsive Mental Institues,
Never earning compliments, rhymings poor like " Save The Kids Tributes"
haha...ok
An explosin to your record when we cross paths no one can feel your raft,
Mentally Ill constantly repeating the same lines like PsychoPaths,
ok
Pay Pals his bars from ebay just to make a 10 line verse,
straight punching this clown leavin him with more colors then Starburts,
eh...ok
Gutting this Dickless bitch with priceless lines, strangle you with ya own embilicle cord,
I'd dismantle you in seconds if i was being serious... your lucky im bored,
um....ok
Im the war lord of rap, the king of the hill, your gonna get whored,
watch as the crowd claps, I count my earnings, then dice ya head with a sword,
ok...not really hittin



breakdown-your verse had a lot of more punches that were hittin in it...saw a couple personals in there....your punches were ok but you need ot just work on the delievery of them...and also work on that flow...nice verse overall....... 5/10

Voted For: .Compulsive.

.Compulsive. - iight spit, the flow was a lil off, but you had some iight punches.

Best Line -

Exausted with words when i demolish his field like impulsive Mental Institues,
Never earning compliments, rhymings poor like " Save The Kids Tributes"
Worst Line - Im the war lord of rap, the king of the hill, your gonna get whored,
watch as the crowd claps, I count my earnings, then dice ya head with a sword,

~Souljah~ - Your spit was to short, you had iight punches, and it flowed well.

Best Line - This hoe's flow's basic, average joe's prose's wasted
Nigga i can't spell your name without a "LOSE" face it.....

Worst Line - I'll tear through your lines like playin dot to dot with a knife
Over your spinal cord, it's like they pay to fuck your rhymes, this nigga's

OVERALL - Souljah might have took this if he did more line, Comp gets this with more line, more punches. Soul go as many lines are you can next time.

Vote - Comp

RTF in Sig of Vote be REMOVED!

Voted For: .Compulsive.

Voted 4 Compulsive

Compolsive Best Line:
An explosin to your record when we cross paths no one can feel your raft,
Mentally Ill constantly repeating the same lines like PsychoPaths

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~Souljah~ Best Line:
This hoe's flow's basic, average joe's prose's wasted
Nigga i can't spell your name without a "LOSE" face it.....

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Overall:
his flow' vicious, opening was superior...Souljah lacked structure..this battle was one sided..Souljah did u come to battle...seemed as if it was str8 up all rushed...dhhaammmm!

Voted For: |||DRKMAN|||

Honestly even though Complusive came with a decent vocab, and a well structured verse... I thought that his punches were rather lack luster... it was as if he tried to hard to sound more educated and forgot to really bring any worth wild heat... Souljah just hit him harder and the personal to end it was better than anything Complusive said in his verse

Opener: Tie Neither hit hard... or really at all
Closer: Souljah
Punches: Souljah
Personals: Souljah
Structure: Compulsive

Vote: Souljah

Voted For: .Compulsive.

i have to give this to compulsive....definately one sided....not even a competition. souljah, i think only one bar in your whole verse actually RHYMED!!! So It's Obvius Compulsive Took This......One Sided Battle.


return the favor.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221166

Voted For: .Compulsive.

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

Well this wasn't onesided.. [/sarcasm]

~Souljah~

First off your structure is fucked.


I'll tear through your lines like playin dot to dot with a knife
Over your spinal cord, it's like they pay to fuck your rhymes

Umm no. Didn't even make logical sense. What the fuck? lol

this nigga'sLines are whored, drop a rhyme, I'm bored
flows like Scratched math CDs i've heard this niggas shit "times" before

Decent. Just decent.

This hoe's flow's basic, average joe's prose's wasted
Nigga i can't spell your name without a "LOSE" face it

Not a closer. Actually not even good.

.Compulsive.


Exausted with words when i demolish his field like impulsive Mental Institues,
Never earning compliments, rhymings poor like " Save The Kids Tributes"

Decent.

An explosin to your record when we cross paths no one can feel your raft,
Mentally Ill constantly repeating the same lines like PsychoPaths,

I don't get it.

Pay Pals his bars from ebay just to make a 10 line verse,
straight punching this clown leavin him with more colors then Starburts,

Pretty good.

Gutting this Dickless bitch with priceless lines, strangle you with ya own embilicle cord,
I'd dismantle you in seconds if i was being serious... your lucky im bored,

haha. Got a chucle from this one.

Im the war lord of rap, the king of the hill, your gonna get whored,
watch as the crowd claps, I count my earnings, then dice ya head with a sword,

Weak.

Overall: This was decent as a battle. Compulsive got it cuz he had more lines, or should I say more GOOD lines. Souljah work on vocab and puinches. Compulsive just adjust your lines a little and work or connecting with more personals and come harder. Word.

v/Compulsive