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gladbag 10-25-05 04:52 PM

What Make MALICIOUS Snap Like That STROBE
 
What Make MALICIOUS Snap Like That STROBE

Couldn’t be a leader with general stars bitch got criminal scars
Of foggy stupidity and cloggy humidity hell it don’t rain on this bazaar
Clown bitch don’t rhyme good just blind wood no roots flow
Absolute garbage, this bitch suspicious not MALICIOUS yo
And expeditious hoe see a retard I regard as below average
Bitch wanna toss salad but as boss not valid so I throw cabbage
In y7our ugly face a bubbly disgrace in a pool of shit this fool
Admit he’s to stupid to lead his policy is a feeble sight no school
Or equal rights in what he does, why this bitch move posts hey STROBE
You wear the robe share the code on how to delete this cat that drove
Me nuts, why this bitch moves posts? It would behoove most
Of us if this fuss just disappears, give this chump a broom as host
Sweep the room and roast beef as a cook this is his true profession
Look you not a work of art just a jerk not smart only know aggression
Need to shower your foul body use you power foul and snotty
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WhoAmI 10-25-05 06:49 PM

are you Maddrapper?

Elegiac 10-26-05 05:16 PM

This was barely a diss IMO...just some poorly set up multies and vocab..

gladbag 10-26-05 06:45 PM

shit off the hook cats trying to play it off

Shazz 10-26-05 06:46 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by |||DRKMAN|||
are you Maddrapper?

Im thinkin that too..
Sounds wack just like him

noname 10-26-05 06:54 PM

Ok...
the problem with your verse..is that your not throwing punches.Ya got a nice,strong rhyme scheme..but a lot of times..you end up forcing it.In your verse,ur lines..either made no sense due to forcedness or rhyme scheme...or wuz just flat out weak.
Only plus side to your shit is that it's unique and way different from the rest of shit people post here.
Just learn to not force ya rhyme scheme.


Leave some feed in my OM plz.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209018

gladbag 10-26-05 09:41 PM

all righ thanks fo rthe props for real yall loving it


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