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Rhyming Like EMINEM
Rhyming Like EMINEM
Look cats rate my dome as stupid I’ll get the microphone And loop it around your neck like Clint Eastwood gone And hang em high so go ahead and make my day you fake Anyway got plenty of Dre for you sucker NWA ready to make Another hit brothers can spit like I do and when Ice Cube Is not a nice dude I get my AK and walk away after I heist his food? Or get on my Honda go borrow JLO's Anaconda he don’t like snakes Hardcore program, doors go slammed in my face taking Kim out for steaks So we can make up for Haley sake, so we at the golden Corral And this dude walks up talks corrupt like he knows my wife Kim Ready to knife him so what? You never seen ass before? Life’s dim I started to freak or whatever so Kim yall sleep together? Oh no Just friends, so yo dawg kim got a man and that’s me on the down low bro Oh fuck now feeble and misled wanna stick needle in my head Dude best get lost it’ll be a rude cost in my gun blast forgot no bullets Then ready to pistol whip this ass brain starting to slip fast ready to pull it |
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29 peeps and only one response come on yall let the cat out the bag
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What is there to respond to???????????????????????
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Rhyming Like EMINEM -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rhyming Like EMINEM Look cats rate my dome as stupid I’ll get the microphone And loop it around your neck like Clint Eastwood gone And hang em high so go ahead and make my day you fake Anyway got plenty of Dre for you sucker NWA ready to make Another hit brothers can spit like I do and when Ice Cube Is not a nice dude I get my AK and walk away after I heist his food? Or get on my Honda go borrow JLO Anaconda he don’t like snakes Hardcore program, doors go slammed in my face taking Kim out for steaks So we can make up for Haley sake, so we at the golden Corral And this dude walks up talks corrupt like he knows my wife Kim Ready to knife him so what? You never seen ass before? Life’s dim I started to freak or whatever so Kim yall sleep together? Oh no Just friends, so yo dawg kim got a man and that’s me on the down low bro Oh fuck now feeble and misled wanna stick needle in my head Dude best get lost it’ll be a rude cost if my gun blast forgot no bullets Then ready to pistol whip this ass brain starting to slip fast ready to pull it -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Last edited by bagglad : 10-26-2005 at 05:48 AM. bagglad View Public Profile Send a private message to bagglad Find More Posts by bagglad 10-25-2005, 06:01 PM #2 108mics Folklore Legend Join Date: Nov 2003 Age: 22 Crib: Western MA Posts: 5,043 Points: 75 (Donate) Rep Level: 1451 This was not eminem, this was you, but you killed the shit. You the best, seriously. You need to quit doing RM and put on shows dog. I feel your flow homey. Word, for real. You the illest like Willis. __________________ "Slow it up, speed it up, slow it up, speed it up Mettle Finger's feed beats Grimm Reaper eat it up Speed 'em up, slow 'em up, speed 'em up, slow 'em up Brainsick, Tick, Tick, Tick, MF blow it up BOOM!" MF Grimm 108mics View Public Profile Challenge 108mics in the Arcade Send a private message to 108mics Find More Posts by 108mics 10-25-2005, 06:31 PM #3 Lunatock Registered User Join Date: May 2005 Crib: Louisville, KY Posts: 117 Points: 0 (Donate) Rep Level: 0 Quote: Originally Posted by bagglad Rhyming Like EMINEM Look cats rate my dome as stupid I’ll get the microphone And loop it around your neck like Clint Eastwood gone And hang em high so go ahead and make my day you fake Anyway got plenty of Dre for you sucker NWA ready to make I thought your opener was whack. Quote: Originally Posted by Bagglad Hardcore program, doors go slammed in my face taking Kim out for steaks So we can make up for Haley sake, so we at the golden Corral And this dude walks up talks corrupt like he knows my wife Kim Ready to knife him so what? You never seen ass before? Life’s dim I started to freak or whatever so Kim yall sleep together? Oh no Just friends, so yo dawg kim got a man and that’s me on the down low bro I'm feelin that part, though. Props. Lunatock View Public Profile Challenge Lunatock in the Arcade Send a private message to Lunatock Find More Posts by Lunatock 10-25-2005, 07:40 PM #4 bagglad Registered User Join Date: Oct 2005 Crib: Posts: 109 Points: 0 (Donate) Rep Level: 10 hey thanks for the props for real yall bagglad View Public Profile Send a private message to bagglad Find More Posts by bagglad 10-25-2005, 10:37 PM #5 New Born Alias Nu-nu or New Born Join Date: Apr 2004 Age: 25 Crib: L.A. babey Posts: 172 Points: 5 (Donate) Rep Level: 0 shit was kool New Born Alias View Public Profile Challenge New Born Alias in the Arcade Send a private message to New Born Alias Find More Posts by New Born Alias 10-26-2005, 05:46 AM #6 bagglad Registered User Join Date: Oct 2005 Crib: Posts: 109 Points: 0 (Donate) Rep Level: 10 Hey Yall Thanks For The Props On This One For Real Yo bagglad View Public Profile Send a private message to bagglad Find More Posts by bagglad 10-26-2005, 06:01 PM #7 BLOODraven Registered User Join Date: Oct 2005 Crib: reppin Cali Woodland hills Posts: 32 Points: 0 (Donate) Rep Level: 10 that was nothing like eminem.... but i was still feeling it, keep it up dawg __________________ My flow is so bold ur obligated to feel this, If i'm not ill, then i dont know what the definition of ill is/ "I don't promote violence, I just encourage it" - Eminem BLOODraven AKA big JAY BLOODraven View Public Profile Challenge BLOODraven in the Arcade Send a private message to BLOODraven Find More Posts by BLOODraven 10-26-2005, 06:22 PM #8 Cinn Registered User Join Date: Jul 2004 Age: 21 Crib: Cinncinatti Posts: 7 Points: 0 (Donate) Rep Level: 0 your opener coulda been a lil thighter but your all round flow is sick __________________ Cinn City's Finest A.K.A. Blaze Alexander Cinn View Public Profile Challenge Cinn in the Arcade Send a private message to Cinn Find More Posts by Cinn 10-26-2005, 08:14 PM #9 bagglad Registered User Join Date: Oct 2005 Crib: Posts: 109 Points: 0 (Donate) Rep Level: 10 thanks for the propls yall got to keep droppin gfor real bagglad View Public Profile Send a private message to bagglad Find More Posts by bagglad Sponsor Text Ads: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Think You can beat the Janitor @ Poker? Want your ad here? |
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LMAO!! @ this piece, NO...not because it is funny, but because it is weak.
dude you need a hobby, the rhyimin was basic like fuck... the overall feel of the piece made me think you were a herb.... ...but hey, ure MADDRAPPER....so close enough.... flow was ok, prolly the best part of the piece, up ure shit......3/10 |
Nick Fletcher ok fletch thanks for the critique but i dropped a little taste of this in your thread i can you don' tlike it but yo dawg that piece in your thread shows i have vocab if I choose to use so the elevation factor maybe revresed holla back dawg
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there no way this flows to a beat the way its written..
'its mainly run on sentences', did you take english in school? i mean everything ive read by you is crammed with nonsense and i can tell you only have one thing in mind when writing .......multiple syllable ryhmin...... which you try way to hard at cuz you dont succeed.... |
this could flow to a beat dont listen to a gay ass text head^^^^^^^anyways it could flow depending on your flow with it you could pull it off.it does have a eminem type flow in parts.problem is theres no punchlines here.theres nothing to make me ohh or ahh or even think its jammed with nonsense like jack said.i think instead of trying to be eminem try making your own niche and maybe youll be nice one day.just honest feedback.
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like i said..."the way its written"..gay ass text head...stfu cali.. . . daz |
This was OK...
A few parts at the beggining ain't make much sence. but for the most part..it was ite.. Does seem like Eminem by the way you accented some of ur rhymes.... So...yea...it was ite... |
thanks for the props and critique and natural killa most of all thanks for being real dawg
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there are a few haterz man but i thought tht was madd as fuck. Good rhymes and muties. Funny, if someone thinks its a little basic fair enough but i think it was superior to a lot of the other shit on this site.
keep up the good work bro, that was funny as hell, sick entertaining too |
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