KempoMRK vs Kamze
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 15

Check in by: 10-27-05 at 10:05 AM

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KempoMRK has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-05 09:36 AM.

Kamze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-05 09:54 AM.

I can tell you ain't at all gangsta, the way you living live,
Cos you ain't got a 4-4...your record just rocks a 5-5,
Your verses are whack, weak and composed in the wrong manner,
As your bars are as choppy as the cut in your banner,
Finest in Manchester? I guess that's true, ah yeah,
Cos I knew there was a reason that I've never been there,
Guess you give pleasure so I'll put an O on your name you geek,
But that's kinda apt cos...It's weird how you Kamze-O weak.

Yo, abit rushed, but i thought it was better than a no-show.

Can't beileve this kid, steppin to battle me, he got alota heart,
I know i'm gona win, cuz it's easy to see, he don't get a MRK (mark),
His rec is 1-1, he got no hope , he's just a helpless muthafucka,
And everyone know, that MRK, actually stands for mrkocksucka,
His picture faded, like his dreams, of ever being something great,
His reign of success will never come,just like when he masturbates,
I wouldn't be surprised, if this bitch decied to make a no-show,
Cuz He always kills the tempo, so, he decided to name himself kempo, (kills Tempo -K-empo)

Ay yo, we upin for votez !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo we uppinnnnnnn for votez we'll RTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for Kamze
 

polls.............................................

Voted For: KempoMRK

Can't beileve this kid, steppin to battle me, he got alota heart,
I know i'm gona win, cuz it's easy to see, he don't get a MRK (mark),
3...poor attempt at nameplay
His rec is 1-1, he got no hope , he's just a helpless muthafucka,
And everyone know, that MRK, actually stands for mrkocksucka,
1...this concept is herbish
His picture faded, like his dreams, of ever being something great,
His reign of success will never come,just like when he masturbates,
1...OMG...the problem with this is the same as above..
I wouldn't be surprised, if this bitch decied to make a no-show,
Cuz He always kills the tempo, so, he decided to name himself kempo,
4...bah...

I can tell you ain't at all gangsta, the way you living live,
Cos you ain't got a 4-4...your record just rocks a 5-5,
5..ehh..it wuz creative,I'll give you that.
Your verses are whack, weak and composed in the wrong manner,
As your bars are as choppy as the cut in your banner,
2...weak punch
Finest in Manchester? I guess that's true, ah yeah,
Cos I knew there was a reason that I've never been there,
5...decent..
Guess you give pleasure so I'll put an O on your name you geek,
But that's kinda apt cos...It's weird how you Kamze-O weak.
5....ok...

Ok..this was easy.
kempo got this easy.Becuz he didn't have herbish concepts and shit as Kamze.
I mean..Kamze...just look at ur 2nd and 3rd bars...you sound herbish when saying shit like that.Like him masterbating and not coming...or suckin dick...those are all played out...

Vote-Kempo


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Voted For: Kamze

Aiight, vote goes to Kamze.

Wordplay- Kamze
Vocab- Kamze
Punches- Kamze
Structure Kamze
Flow- Kamze

Overall i thought Kamze won this. Bcuz he had harder punches.

Can't beileve this kid, steppin to battle me, he got alota heart,
I know i'm gona win, cuz it's easy to see, he don't get a MRK (mark), Opening lines of Kamze
Vs.

I can tell you ain't at all gangsta, the way you living live,
Cos you ain't got a 4-4...your record just rocks a 5-5,

Overall Kamze's 2 opening lines made it alot clearer that he won to me. Gd battle people. RTF on my battle. Link in sig.

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Voted For: Kamze

Kamze - You flowed well, you had good punches and personals where decent.

Best Line - I wouldn't be surprised, if this bitch decied to make a no-show,
Cuz He always kills the tempo, so, he decided to name himself kempo, (kills Tempo -K-empo)

Worst Line - His rec is 1-1, he got no hope , he's just a helpless muthafucka,
And everyone know, that MRK, actually stands for mrkocksucka,

KempoMRK - You had a good flow, personals where iight, and decent punches.

Best Line - I can tell you ain't at all gangsta, the way you living live,
Cos you ain't got a 4-4...your record just rocks a 5-5,

Worst Line - Finest in Manchester? I guess that's true, ah yeah,
Cos I knew there was a reason that I've never been there,

OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I think Kamze won with the better flow, and personals. Kemp you came solid with your flow also, and had some good punchlines, but I didnt feel your personals as much.

Vote - Kamze

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Voted For: KempoMRK

Ok

Kamze

Can't beileve this kid, steppin to battle me, he got alota heart,
I know i'm gona win, cuz it's easy to see, he don't get a MRK (mark),
- Not workin man
His rec is 1-1, he got no hope , he's just a helpless muthafucka,
And everyone know, that MRK, actually stands for mrkocksucka,
- Would be ok, but you don't spell kock with a K
His picture faded, like his dreams, of ever being something great,
His reign of success will never come,just like when he masturbates,
- No, played as fuck concept man
I wouldn't be surprised, if this bitch decied to make a no-show,
Cuz He always kills the tempo, so, he decided to name himself kempo, (kills Tempo -K-empo)
- Ok....I guess, too basic though

Flow was fine, rhyming was basic though...lines were far from great, most were not good at all...need to be more original in approach, and be more precise and effective with your punchlines

Kempo

I can tell you ain't at all gangsta, the way you living live,
Cos you ain't got a 4-4...your record just rocks a 5-5,
- Nice opener
Your verses are whack, weak and composed in the wrong manner,
As your bars are as choppy as the cut in your banner,
- Nice again....
Finest in Manchester? I guess that's true, ah yeah,
Cos I knew there was a reason that I've never been there,
- Ok
Guess you give pleasure so I'll put an O on your name you geek,
But that's kinda apt cos...It's weird how you Kamze-O weak.
- Not really workin here...

Decent verse with some good lines....flow was ok, but rhyming was basic...personal. and good disses here...good structured verse, looks like you know what to do....just keep battling and improving

Kemp took this, his verse was generally better and he was more precise with his lines in terms of attackin the opponent...Stay Up both

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Voted For: KempoMRK

didnt feel this battle, both didnt have anything I liked and came weak, I'd go with a tie if it wasnt for kamze using a cum line and that mrk line, I seen heads do that mrk mark shit on kem before so na at that... and that closed was a stretch. kem also had some weak shit, but anyone who uses a cum line deserves to lose so yea, im voting for the lesser of the two evils, the least whackest.

vote - KempoMRK

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